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Whispers in the Nighttime
Poetry or prose
Ended February 25, 2024 • 14 Entries • Created by AJAY9979
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Whispers in the Nighttime
Poetry or prose
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Woodlands

A lone man wanders through a desolate forest. Trudging through thick snow he meanders like the last fugitive snowflake from a storm long since past. Nighttime surrounds him, he follows the direction of the wind. Looking up to the sky he hopes to find the weakest sign or call but is only met with the darkness, the silence.

Plants wither and decay like specters forecasting his own fate. Through the woodlands he sees nothing but trees who've lived to see more seasons than he has footprints in the snow. In the distance he hears the occasional plaintive cry of a crow or wolf before once again being engulfed by the silence. He can feel it now, the cold, icy grip, his mind is failing him, there's nowhere to go. He lays down as the complacent spectator to the erasure of himself, his mind grows as blank as the terrain surrounding him; he's now one with his environment, soon he'll be as pure and indifferent in conception as the shriveled plants and rigid trees.

The man had always followed the wind. Its direction wasn't always certain, its call not always strong, but tonight it whispers to him.

"Keep looking for glimmers of light in places where there is nothing."

He opens his eyes and for a moment the infinite black sky is no different than the oblivion from which he had woken up from. Then, in the distance, a soft, white star begins to glimmer plainly, and soon came another, then another. He looks for any discernible pattern or meaning in their configuration and realizes that they form Orion. Despite the veil of tears now clouding his vision, everything preceding that moment felt blurry and obscure. Now he could finally see; he staggers back up to his feet.

He doesn't know where to go. He stands alone in a vast forest and struggles to find one clear path to take. The last few drifting snowflakes fall to the ground and sunlight begins to break through the clouds. All he can do is walk in the direction of the wind, slowly, steadily, until he arrives at some distant light and finds refuge in a place he may call home.

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Whispers in the Nighttime
Poetry or prose
lisal

Black Spider Nursery Rhyme

Little Miss Muffet sat on a tuffet when along came the

hideous spider that burrowed up inside her

in a web that traps a

spider comes here every night,

into a fortress of filth and garbage that reaches to the ceiling.

It rots with food, maggots, storybooks, torn ragged dolls

bearing an uncanny resemblance to the almost-woman

peering at herself with hollow eyes in the mirror. A horrific house of clutter

filled with sickness, rage and something started long ago

inside another house shrouded in shadows.

I whisper my way through yard sales lured by the siren call

of priceless treasures stupid people give away; bro ke n teacu ps,

cracked mirrors, scuffed shoes, old dog collars, mismatched earrings

bottle caps, buttons.

My whole life is laid bare in this fortress made of glorious, damaged goods.

What do you think I am anyway?

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Whispers in the Nighttime
Poetry or prose
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Bringerofsmiles

R.E.M

The night brings many questions but few answers

Thoughts move and twirl like tiny dancers

Did he say Tony Danza..........

I've lost my thought

The thing I brought

Has just now left my ummmm

It was a song!!

Or a tone, a beat maybe yes that's it

Beep beep beep beep

Awake

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Whispers in the Nighttime
Poetry or prose
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Rafaelopezjr

During the downpour,

at the aftermath,

buried in the mire,

drowning in my bile,

semiconsciously

I begin to float

into the abyss

immediately

surrounded by ghosts

and their tales of woes.

The final flicker

blows away all hope

and I, plummeting,

become a puppet

at the mercy of

my depravities...

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Whispers in the Nighttime
Poetry or prose
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dianetex

Whispers

I often find myself sitting and rocking on the floor

sweating in fear

my eyes focused on the door

I sit in silence so that I can clearly hear

Steps shuffling along

stopping in the hall

I know them like an old familiar song

to me they do call

Slowly they enter to check on me

they talk and smile

within the tiny cup they hold it will set me free me

I swallow they watch me for awhile

They leave

and the lock does turn

in my mind the stories of yesterdays begin to blend and weave

my eyes fill with tears that burn

Faces I have known

Memories or fiction

did I hear myself moan

Life can be such a contradiction

The whispers in the nighttime

do come calling

The whispers in the nighttime

I'm slowly drifting and falling.

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Whispers in the Nighttime
Poetry or prose
ErJo1122

Where The Heroes Always Win

Jacob read her stories of kings, queens, princes and princesses, foreign lands, kingdoms, cobblestone paths, swords of steel, and fire breathing dragons. And even when Cassy began to look frightened, Jacob smiled at her and said, “Don’t worry, Cassy. In stories like these, the heroes win.” And she would relax, the tensity in her shoulders disappearing like smoke in the wind. She’d lay back in the bed, and let her brother finish the story. Sometimes she listened, and sometimes she just looked at him, and thanked whoever resided above those fluffy white clouds, that he was her brother. And Jake looked at her and felt the same way. He loved her, but he wished he were older. He wished he wasn’t flunking out of school, he wished living wasn’t so goddamn expensive, and he wished that they could hop in a car, or find a cobblestone path and disappear.

Things had never been good between their folks, but recently it had reached code red. Jake, as a younger version of himself, would lay in bed the way Cassidy was now laying in bed, and he’d pray that they’d stay together, and he could see in her eyes that she was thinking the same. Thinking that they should stay together because that’s what homes were. That’s what a nuclear family was. It was a mom and a dad, and a boy and a girl. It felt right, or at least, she thought it should feel right. She wanted it to feel right, and Jake wanted to tell her that it would never feel the way she wanted it to, and that their best bet was that the old man fell down drunk one night at the bar and smashed his skull open, or that someone he owed money to decided that he was never going to pay it back, and did the job that Jake wished he could do. If he was older, broader in the shoulders, thicker in the waist. If he knew a martial art, or he owned a gun, or he had an escape plan. But he had none, and so as the screaming echoed downstairs, Jake read her stories, until she fell asleep, and then he wrapped his arm around her and laid, listening to her soft snores, and playing out a fantasy in his own head.

At school, Jake doodled all day in his black notebook. Story ideas for Cassy. Places free of industrial smoke, and devoid of unemployment slips, and decks of cards, and hard liquor, and inflation. Places where people were set up to succeed, not dominos, but stone pillars. And when he came out of his trance and looked up to see University representatives talking about chances, talking about jobs, and money, and handing out plain black or white shirts with the school’s logo, he felt sick. And he raised his hand, as one of the representatives, a skinny, tall 20 year old with greasy black hair, and thick spectacles, and shirt that hung loosely around his waist, said,

“Yes, sir?”

And he smiled, but behind that smile was something darker, and behind those eyes, were cell bars. Jake could see right through it, and he asked,

“How can I afford it?”

“Well, there are scholarships,”

Jake shook his head no.

“Well there are government loans, of course.”

“Oh yeah, so I got to school for four, five years on loans, and then what?”

“Well, you hopefully get a job.”

“Okay, and how much debt will I owe? And will I ever be able to pay it off? And what kinds of jobs will be waiting for me? What will they pay?”

And the greasy representative, chuckled nervously and wiped his acne filled forehead, before Mr. Andrews, told him that was enough, and opened the floor for other questions. Questions about majors, and dorm rooms. And he realized that these people were living in a fantasy world of their own too, they just didn’t know it. At least he knew he was creating fantasies. And did that make him better? No, he thought. Not better, but different. Different.

That evening he heard the door burst open downstairs, and angry slurs coming from the mouth of his drunken father. He heard an empty bottle smash against the floor, and eventually he heard his mother screaming. Cassy heard it too, but she was 10, and Jake told her to close her eyes and tried his best to get her lost, get her lost in the world he’d created. Get her lost so deeply inside of it, that anything outside of the fantasy was the real fantasy, and where she was was reality.

And when dishes began to smash, and when their mothers uncontrollable sobs travelled up the stairs like a demon, Jake told Cassy that it was her imagination. That this was the world, and he improvised talking about a great heroine making her way through a swift and brutal storm, where things smashed, and people screamed, and he made sure to remind her that good won. In the end, it would win but there were challenges that the heroes needed to face first, and once they made it through the many obstacles thrown at them, they would find,

“What?” Cassy asked. “What will they find at the end?”

And Jake looked at her, and he rubbed her soft cheeks, and looked at the innocence in her eyes and her smile made his heart shatter, and it broke him in so many pieces, and he hoped that she couldn’t read his eyes because if she did, she’d know something, something she wasn’t supposed to know. Not yet. Please stay a kid a little longer, he pleaded with himself, please.

“I can’t ruin the surprise, Cass. That’s part of the adventure.”

And that evening, again he laid with her, and he whispered, we’ll get out of here, Cass. I promise you, we’ll get out of here.

Then downstairs a gunshot echoed like a thunderclap. Cassy and Jake bolted upright as heavy footsteps climbed the stairs.

“I’m scared, Jake”

“No,” he whispered, “you’re a brave warrior, Cass. You’re an archer. A sword wielder, and this is the dragon, Cass. Once we defeat the dragon, we’ll be free. We’ll be free.”

“Then you’ll tell me what happens at the end, Jake?”

Then the door burst open, and the dragon stood in the entrance.

“Remember, Cass. Heroes always win in these stories.”

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Whispers in the Nighttime
Poetry or prose
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Vyxyn

So much more…

By the light of the moon

as the crickets sing,

the voices of the ancestors

move through time,

it’s a soul thing.

I hear the ancients,

I feel them well!

They give me courage

they give me strength to tell.

Whispering sweet words of comfort

words of encouragement for the future

whispering in wisdom of the battle ahead,

so much more sorrow

so much more death….

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Whispers in the Nighttime
Poetry or prose
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7v7

The Submarine of Dream

We don't hear them

and never will

all the lisping voices

that emerge in waves

as soon as into sleep

we are submerged

the wonder, all about us

whispers in, like a tide,

of tangible shadows

breathed in, to surround us

with quick wrenches and

little heavy hammers,

asking this, and tweaking

that, in night vision googles

02.24.2024

Whispers in the Nighttime challenge @AJAY9979

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Whispers in the Nighttime
Poetry or prose
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GerardDiLeo

A Good Fit

Her breath on my chest

Are whispers nocturnal

Fomenting the day ahead

Before my plans awaken

Her convexity

To my concavity

Promises breathy secrets

For tomorrow yet unrealized

Her warmth

Blankets my chills

Until we equilibrate

To our life ahead

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Whispers in the Nighttime
Poetry or prose
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CynthiaCalder

Whispers of the Fay

Whisper light

Is her flight

As she flits all about

In the garden midst the night

Beautiful unearthly, mythical sprite.

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With an aura of delight

She spins her tapestry of flight

Incandescent in the beams of night

Flower blossoms open at the sight.

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Whispers echo in wind’s gust

Amidst the garden's flowers,

The brilliant sheen of pixie dust

Becomes a veil of cryptic showers.

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Visions fair and small

Whisper amongst us night and day

Spreading magic wide and tall

Are these alluring creatures of the Fay.

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Fortune smiles on you,

If you are amongst the select few,

Who in the light of night see such a sprite

For they bring good fortune to your plight

Whilst spinning all your dreams anew.