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To celebrate this wonderful eclipse, write a fantasy piece in which the moon is the central element of the story/poem.
Cover image for post Spectral Moon, by dustygrein
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dustygrein

Spectral Moon

Feminine, mysterious - constant change

I find strange; quite curious.

Oh spectral moon, why haunt me thus?

Nighttime sky is your domain - come what may,

day by day, you wax and wane;

your monthly cycle's quite insane.

Like the ocean’s ebb and flow - empty, full,

pushing, pulling, to and fro;

so do my lover’s passions go.

Moon, you’ll stay unknown, I guess - pale and cold,

truth be told, I must confess,

I understand my lover less.

© 2017 - dustygrein

** The englyn penfyr has become one of my favorite poetic forms now. I hope you enjoy it's off-balance rhymes and unique syllabic flow.

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JessicaJohnson 
A wonderful write!
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ASelfCalledL 
The rhythmic flow was wonderfully constructed. I mean, i'll pretty much like anything that has to do with moons, but I always prefer for poems to have a satisfyng rhythm to them. It's called an englyn penfyr?
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dustygrein 
@ASelfCalleL - Yes, it is an old Welsh form. I am a neo-classicist, and I love all the old poetic forms, from sonnets to villanelles, but something about the Welsh englynion (that is the plural) touches me in a very unique way.
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BatelEvvie 
AHHHH I LOVE THIS ONE !
I am 21 years or older.