Challenge



To celebrate this wonderful eclipse, write a fantasy piece in which the moon is the central element of the story/poem.
Spectral Moon
Feminine, mysterious - constant change
I find strange; quite curious.
Oh spectral moon, why haunt me thus?
Nighttime sky is your domain - come what may,
day by day, you wax and wane;
your monthly cycle's quite insane.
Like the ocean’s ebb and flow - empty, full,
pushing, pulling, to and fro;
so do my lover’s passions go.
Moon, you’ll stay unknown, I guess - pale and cold,
truth be told, I must confess,
I understand my lover less.
© 2017 - dustygrein
** The englyn penfyr has become one of my favorite poetic forms now. I hope you enjoy it's off-balance rhymes and unique syllabic flow.

JessicaJohnson
A wonderful write!

ASelfCalledL
The rhythmic flow was wonderfully constructed. I mean, i'll pretty much like anything that has to do with moons, but I always prefer for poems to have a satisfyng rhythm to them. It's called an englyn penfyr?

dustygrein
@ASelfCalleL - Yes, it is an old Welsh form. I am a neo-classicist, and I love all the old poetic forms, from sonnets to villanelles, but something about the Welsh englynion (that is the plural) touches me in a very unique way.

BatelEvvie
AHHHH I LOVE THIS ONE !