Challenge Ended
Reflections on Your own Suspension of Disbelief
Poetry or Prose
Ended September 30, 2017 • 21 Entries • Created by Mavia
Challenge
Reflections on Your own Suspension of Disbelief
Poetry or Prose
Playing with Nature
Walking through the park,
creating creatures
that dance out of clouds,
from within a spark.
How does one measure
instict? A voice shouts
a whispered command.
I quicken my pace
only to hear, THUD!
Had I stopped to stand,
death had been my fate.
Gusts and old trees hug.
Mavia
omg! like the physical-and-mental being hit by a tree!! not just an image suspended in our imagination, but the final suspending of reality :o so good touche! loved the title... signaling the significance of the eternal Play in which we take part in a transient way... that which eventually takes us away :)M
Rafaelopezjr
@MsH, Had this not actually happened, I don't think I would have been able to write it.
Mavia
Truly "had I stopped to stand..." !! signifies the critical importance of not losing momentum... inertia being fatal
poetsdream
Really good write