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Make me cry an ocean.
Ended March 21, 2015 • 8 Entries • Created by julieangevine
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julieangevine
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is it all a lie?

i couldn't walk

My feet were swollen

i couldn't breathe

nostrils trapped with tears

my love of life is fading

why is this pain so real?

you said true love lasted forever

that you would always be

right beside my bedroom window

stripping me of my fear

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Paige
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Stare at something with wide eyes while a strong wind blows in your face.

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Deiticlast
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There once was a girl who loved a boy. He died, never knowing her love, though he yearned for it with his dying breath.

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mcpct_15
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I guarantee this will have you in tears:

Chop an onion.

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MamaT
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Cry me an ocean

But please, not today,

I'm busy with a river.

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Lexihoffman
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Here we go..

It all began when they killed my sister, I broke her promise...

I remember that fateful day.

She died.

That's it, all I remember.

Well, that, and the way she died.

When we both stepped outside the gunshots rang out, a bullet then struck me in the chest. It felt as if I exploded inside. But, for me. The bullet was stuck in my rib, but for my sister. It was more fatal.

My mother said she found me above her, clutching her head softly. Crying, and screaming to the sky. For my only sister to wake up. But the blood coming out of her mouth and ear, made her living spirit questionable. When she opened her eyes, she smiled.

Mom said, then she died.

Goodbye, Juliet..

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BreakinBrecht
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AIDs babies.

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RoseThorn
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A girl with two corpse loves

There was a girl with eyes bright like the sun and a laugh that pulled you and held you down like gravity. Magnetized by her rhythmic voice you couldn't resist, you revolved around her like the moon around the earth, desperate to feel its vibration.

There was nothing she wanted more than those two burdened boys to smile their beautiful smiles.

Night and day she smothered them with love till she was dry.

No drip, no drop left to catch for herself.

The boy with curly black hair and a deep nasally voice had to swallow his mothers purple pills so he wouldn't wake up with tears streaming down his cheeks and screaming her name because the nightmares started again.

The boy with fiery red locks and callused finger tips had to punch the walls so he didn't hit her face instead.

The boy with curly black hair and a deep nasally voice had to lift the blade to the vein throbbing in his neck because the pills didn't work anymore. His voice raspy from screaming, now silent. His tear stained cheeks, now cold.

The boy with fiery red locks and callused finger tips laid in the snow to numb his bloody knuckles and to freeze the heart that caused him so much agony. His locks looked liked fire piercing through the snow when the dogs found him.

The girl that had eyes bright like the sun with a laugh that pulled you and held you down like gravity was now the girl with pale blue eyes that never laughed again.

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