Ode to exploring the city
The noises the city make are comparable to music
The powerful melody guides you down the streets
And you hurry after it, afraid to lose it
You rush through the crowd of people
But find that your attempts are feeble
For what you hear
Are simply everything, and everyone near
You realize that the magic of exploring the city
Is simply the freedom it provides you
You can see everything
And you can be anyone
Exploring the city is something everyone should do
To anyone who reads this!!
I need advice, and suggestions. Does this sound like an ode? Or do I have it completely wrong?