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Blackgirlwritin

Ode to exploring the city

The noises the city make are comparable to music

The powerful melody guides you down the streets

And you hurry after it, afraid to lose it

You rush through the crowd of people

But find that your attempts are feeble

For what you hear

Are simply everything, and everyone near

You realize that the magic of exploring the city

Is simply the freedom it provides you

You can see everything

And you can be anyone

Exploring the city is something everyone should do

To anyone who reads this!!

I need advice, and suggestions. Does this sound like an ode? Or do I have it completely wrong?

I am 21 years or older.