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Write the best hook to the beginning of a novel. Must start with the words "As my world burned...". No longer than three sentences. Tag me!
ochretiles
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As my world burned, a state of calm returned to the people of Melos. The sacrifice of one for the sanity of many allowed for the continued torture of the condemned. A siren song cast upon a city that refused to see the dangers lurking beneath its mellifluous sounds.

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