Challenge











Monsters
Tag me @Famewriter
starting with a monster...
and ending with you
I will dine with the devil
I will make him smile
there will be nods
and deceitful smiles
I will linger my fingers over his
and tease
in the most provocative of ways
there will be stares
there will be glares
I will lure him with my tongue
and bite my lip
I will play my role
until all is done
I will do that now
and each day
until the world is through
only so when the diner is done
I can leave hell behind
making it just a memory
a whisper of sorts
a heavy breath
on a heated skin
earning redemption
and reaching freedom's door
no longer dining with the devil
but finding my way to you
always to you
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anarosewood
@Famewriter (this should fit the challenge) ;)

voiceinthewind
@anarosewood This is a really strange piece. It sounds like the writer is purposefully going out and having fun with people that the writer never intends to have a permanent relationship with (the devil) until the time comes when they can finally be with the person they wanted all along. I see this as a very vivid and disturbing view of the dating process.

Clarity
@anarosewood yup, it fit the mold great! thanks for entering and tagging me

anarosewood
@voiceinthewind I say, give it another try... this peace means that a person will go through everything bad and play along, just so one day they will be with the only one they ever really wanted... but to get there he or she must fight first, they must struggle... it's definitely not about the dating process... and it was supposed to be disturbing, that part worked, as they say sometimes you have to "stir the pot"

anarosewood
@Famewriter glad it worked, it was a spontaneous write and was build just on one sentence... I figured the "devil" went along with the monster bunch ;) (and yes, this in me being dramatic in my writing)

PrincessHeda
@anarosewood I really liked this. It was fun to read. It’s out there and different and all in a good way. You did fantastic.

anarosewood
@PrincessHeda94 aww, thank you so much hun, and yes, different is good too ;)

voiceinthewind
@anarosewood Art is subjective and that was the impression I got when I read it but I see what you mean.

anarosewood
@voiceinthewind Yes, take the art as you please... free will, free mind, free spirit

Clarity
@anarosewood LOL, you little drama queen!

anarosewood
aaaw, thank you, such compliments @Famewriter ;P

Clarity
@anarosewood I know