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Natethewrite
Hi I’m a 15 year old poet just looking to share my work with the world
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Challenge of the Week CCXXVIII
This week, post a poem of that isn't necessarily your favorite, but it's a favorite of those who read you. Winner is decided by likes and us. As usual, 25 bucks is paid to the winner. Go.
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House of cards

Held together by edges so small

Yet standing so grand and tall

A house of cards a metaphor for life

Dreams stacked so high

Yet so fragile and brittle

All it takes is a little

Gust of wind

To cause the cards to cave in

It exists in a constant state of “what if”

As little as a single draft or drift

Could cause the structure to fell

Just as it takes one decision for a dream to just become a story you tell

Wishing maybe it wasn’t fiction

Life held together like cards by friction

A string of choices placed together like the cards that make up this house

One choice leads to another and a million choices to get to now

It’s a delicate balancing act to make life obey your will

Possible but with every decision harder still

Maybe your king placed next to a queen

Or maybe it was all a dream

Maybe you slipped up and found a joker in your queen’s place

All it takes is one bad day

If you try to put your fate in your hands

You are the only thing allowing your house of cards to stand

But if give up this control you’ve been clinging to

You might find your dreams come true

Maybe in ways unexpected

But now held together by more than edges

If you let your dreams rest on the foundation

Instead of building your grandiose card nation

You’ll find life so much more fulfilling

You won’t be the master of your destiny and you’ll have time to be killing

Because the foundation is all that matters

Hard as you may try, you can’t write your next chapter

Not alone, it’s too much for you

Making your own house of cards is far too difficult to do

Best to leave it to trust

Enjoy the moments you have and invest in love

These are the things that matter

Because eventually your house of cards will shatter

Challenge
A Love Poem to the Intangible
Write a love poem to something intangible.
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Natethewrite in Poetry & Free Verse

Found forever

You know that feeling of connection

Between you and the universe

Like no matter where you go or in what direction

Your fate can’t be reversed

Well I’m thinking about that now

Like somehow

I feel emotion

Like I feel peace

When I see

That one special cosmic being

I feel tingles go down my spine

It’s like momentary bliss inside

A love laced galaxy

Enchanting me

The hope

The lovely splendor of poems dancing on crystal seas

A rope

Tying it to me

By fate bound together

We have found forever

Challenge
Write a Ketek
One of my favorite authors, Brandon Sanderson, created a short poetry form called a ketek. It’s a short reflexive form of poetry in which every word is mirrored around a center word. The word forms can change, noun to adjective, future past, etc (ex: happy can turn into happiness, slept to sleeping or sleep). You can put in any punctuation but no added words that don’t mirror. Here’s an example from one of his books: “You, always about dreams. My soul weeps. Farewell weeping soul. My dreams about, always, you. “ So the challenge is write a ketek. It could be about whatever you want, just follow the rules.
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Breath Taken

breath, mine is taken, have I died? Finally died, I have, taken is my breath