A Traitor Among Us
NOTE: I'm new to screenwriting, so my formatting may be a bit off. I'm not using a screenwriting software, just typing it up on my iPad in Notability App.
I'm looking for feedback on anything from dialogue, story structure, flow of the story, etc.
I wrote 2 screenplays based on the Among Us Game. It's not 100% the Among Us game, I made some changes to fit the story I wanted to tell.
One is from 1st person POV, we follow one character around the entire time: (Google Drive link: 1st Person: A Traitor Among Us (https://drive.google.com/file/d/1MUVylc81GZUBlXmkQUEuQJMKBSVhCskx/view?usp=sharing)
The other is from 3rd Person POV, we (the audience) see everything: (Google Drive link:3rd Person: A Traitor Among US (https://drive.google.com/file/d/12C-UV5swGU-3TKvEgOM_edW1W4AX5MXG/view?usp=sharing)
I've been writing screenplays & other short stories on a weekly basis to improve my writing skills. Feel free to read them.
I also made small website to house the PDFs: https://mostories261398878.wordpress.com/pdfstories/