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Write a poem about something you have no control over and how that lack of control makes you feel.
Ended February 19, 2017 • 74 Entries • Created by PhynneBelle
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sandflea68 in Poetry & Free Verse
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Undying Sun

I drink from your fountains

from a place I can’t leave,

no control over rhythm

of our human needs.

Clustered to the earth,

your hips against mine,

senses once alone

immersed in us, entwined.

I taste intoxicating nectar

sitting in the dark of you,

stars curled around

naked feet, dancing

with your soul.

Wandering through

tangled veins feeling

the wind of my pith,

wafting scent of

bodies interlaced.

Sensual white butterflies

embrace our air,

twilight captures us

in scattered flight,

painted moonlight,

volcanic desire.

Intoxicating beats,

love without boundaries

encompassing our shores.

Shivering lust,

numbness of emotions

washes over, takes hold

tingling without touch

in undying sun.

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haileyelliott in Poetry & Free Verse
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acceleration

The trap door of

morning falls open

I hang, suspended 

on the threads 

of sleep

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Acadec56 in Poetry & Free Verse
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It comes

It comes for everyone 

It comes feircely 

It comes peacefully 

It comes tragically 

It comes dramatically 

It comes when everything is all said and done 

It's name is Death and the end is near.

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Wordslinger
Chapter 109 of 448
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Wordslinger
Chapter 109 of 448
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Morally adrift

Preparation is everything

And good timing is the key

So I think of everything

Make the clockwork sing

And bring fate to its knees

A day of important scheming

Which I really must not fail

Beckons with riches gleaming

Or horrid punishments looming

If my plan goes off the rails

I weigh my porridge from the jar

Microwaved to make it faster

Then I step into my reliable car

Get trapped in snow for an hour

Cursing the damned weathercaster

The gap between pass and fail

May be whether the weather is

Or whether it is not a gale

And the moral of this pithy tale

Is really whatever you please.

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flower in Poetry & Free Verse
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what I keep telling myself

The amount of control over my emotions does not equate the severity of the issue. 

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Astropoppin in Poetry & Free Verse
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Cheated

My stupidity. My past.

What's done cannot be cast

Aside;

The pride

Has been hacked at with a machete

None of us were ready

Or aware we were capable of this carnage

This damaged

World, it crumbles when I set my skin upon it.

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CYS_Correia in Poetry & Free Verse
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Rain

i’m falling,

falling from the clouds,

clouds that cry crowds...

crowds just like me.

Wow, how nice it was up there,

there with gray pillows,

pillows that the wind blows,

blows with thunder,

thunder that brought the screams of lightnings...

Wow but how nice it was...

                                                                                                                       i’m falling.

                                                                           i’m just a tear from the Hellish heaven,

                                                                                 Not knowing which grave to fall in,

                                                                                                    Not knowing which sin

                                                                                                            i have committed.

                                                                                                            Where will i land?

                                                                                                           Where will i land?

                                                                                                              Will i be awake?

                                                                                               Will it be a river or a lake?

                                                                                                    Where i won’t be seen,

                                                                                             a simple drop in the ocean.

                                                                                                 Or will i hit the ground;

                                                                                                          and if god is good,

                                                                                           i’ll find a seed to grow a tree.

                                                                                                      Where It will be free,

                                                                                                to grow taller than clouds

                                                                         and let apples fall on the heads of angels!

                                                                                                           Wow, can i choose

                                                                    Or will the wind push me to a spider’s web?

                                                                                                                    To be a slave

                                                                                                     but look like a crystal.

                                                                                                                   I have fallen...

                                                                                         on the young tongue of a girl,

                                                                                      Curious for the taste of freedom

...it tastes like lemon.

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AJAY9979 in Poetry & Free Verse
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Games.

Our America.

Handed over to him

In a golden box

Wrapped with a dollar sign bow.

Like a child with a new toy,

His plans become our misery.

Tearing our feet with razor sharp teeth,

Drowning us in dribble as he sleeps,

Letting his friend try us out

Knowing his friend's intentions.

It becomes an heirloom.

Ten year old smashes us with cars.

Daughter forces us to tell her

"You're beautiful."

"I love your purse."

"I'll retweet everything you say."

The toy's protests seem futile,

The sheer numbers deemed

"Not quantifiable"

Despite the obvious facts.

Alternate facts are our reality.

Threatened with separation.

To be sent to different toy stores

At whim, without reading the receipt.

Toys R' Us toys are sent to Walmart.

Disney to Orlando Studios.

Target to Walgreens.

The general vicinity suffices.

In the background,

My horrified eyes water

At the sight of the bully mangling us.

Crushing us with cruel words.

Brutalizing us with threats.

I feel like a dog in a cage

Watching its new owner ready

A needle of questionable serum

To inject into the new test subject.

Helpless.

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Cover image for post Just Stitches In The Quilt, by BrianLandon
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BrianLandon in Poetry & Free Verse
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Just Stitches In The Quilt

Rumi said, “My soul is from elsewhere.”

Truly told, although he misses from where.

Our souls recycle through the universe like every other element of the infinite natural Being.

After all,

are we beyond nature? And not just waves in the sea?

Do we float as we wish to defy the laws of gravity?

Do we think about breathing? Do birds think to fly?

Do lakes weigh the benefits of reflecting the heavenly sky?

Why would man be different than all we can and cannot see?

Possibly it's impossible to fathom our own natural conformity?

Or,

could it be men's egos? Could it be women's roars?

Could it be from zealots pushing black books door to door?

Pimping out the best intended to Satan as a whore?

Religion teaches morals, love, and characters to adore.

Keep the beautiful stories, just add a little more.

Stare into your eyes and contemplate the Milky Way.

The two portray the same pupil patterns,

Go look! Go see what I say.

Just as winter is cold and summer sun is ablaze,

just as devoted knees pain from countless days of pray.

The only constraint in nature is consistency cannot fade.

Thus,

man comes from nature, like a leaf he will wilt.

Fear thy not, existence is one pattern on the ever-warming quilt.

Eternity is the seamstress, always stitching the same patch.

On a quilt woven together, keeping our bonds of love in tact.

Forever.

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psimpson8967 in Poetry & Free Verse
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I Lie in My Room

I lie in my room

The sordid air asphyxiating

The guilty relapse awaiting

My feeble wrists pulsating

I lie in my head

The thoughts dominating

The urges baiting

My placating

I lie in my heart

Berating

Stating

Hate

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