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Is it okay to hold your breath to remind yourself you want to breathe?
Ended July 4, 2016 • 12 Entries • Created by jessicam
Challenge
Is it okay to hold your breath to remind yourself you want to breathe?
It's odd
Swimming with people
They don't get that the only reason I get in the water is so that I can stay under
That all I want
Is to see spots in my vision
Because I have to hold my breath to feel how crisp the air on the surface is
Shells
something about this made me love it
Hlore42
Using crisp to describe the air is what did it for me. This is very well written.
Firdaus
This is brilliant!
misty
beautiful
James
Beautiful
jessicam
This is so good:)