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Above the body after death: Something all of us have heard or read about, or seen in documentaries or on film. Across human history, there has been one outlier that purely represents any given emotionally tied flashback that someone would have seen before dying: Good, bad, heartbreak, excitement, betrayal, or love that was not able to see itself through, and many more. Write a story or poem about this, the extreme outliers, both what they're flashing back to, and why they're about to die. Winning piece of ethereal lift and float gets the $100. Go.
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Echoes of the Final Act

When death comes close, the tapestry of life unfurls its warp and weft woven of moments both divine and dire. Within the silence of final moments, two outliers sit quietly, both tied with a thread of emotion, reflecting the life lived, one of euphoria and one of despair.

Our first outlier, Alice, is an elderly woman. Her final moments flash with scenes of the love she never confessed. As a young woman, she found herself captivated by the boy next door - a bright, charismatic soul named James. Theirs was a friendship filled with shared laughter, stolen glances, and silent yearnings. But the words of love remained unspoken, held captive by her fear. Then the war came and James left, a soldier promising to return. But he didn't. And Alice, left behind, lived a life of ’what-ifs, a half lived life filled with regret.

Our second outlier, Tom, is a man on death row. His life flashes before him, replaying the act that brought him here - an act of betrayal. He was just a kid, lured into the underworld, sold on promises of wealth and power. He climbed the ranks, and to prove his loyalty, he was asked to eliminate a threat a snitch, they called him. With a heavy heart, he did what he was told. But it was a setup, the man was innocent, a pawn in a bigger game. The realization weighed him down, and though he sought redemption, his past caught up with him.

In the dance of death, every life plays out its unique rhythm. Alice and Tom, on the brink of their mortal existence, revisit the singular moments that defined them. Alice's silent love, unfulfilled and unexpressed, a symphony of could-have-beens. Tom's act of betrayal, a stark reminder of the path he was led astray. Their life's song, written in the key of emotion, reverberates in the silent spaces of their dying breaths, echoing the poignancy of the human experience in its final act.

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