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Challenge Ended
Begin A Story, End a Story [Part I]
Begin a story with a photograph. End the story with a bittersweet kiss.
Ended April 29, 2023 • 4 Entries • Created by DianaHForst
Challenge
Begin A Story, End a Story [Part I]
Begin a story with a photograph. End the story with a bittersweet kiss.
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Rafaelopezjr

Bittersweet

At the table she sits, and, as if in an old black and white Hollywood movie, sunlight streams into the age old bar with its filthy windows, illuminating only her. My heart slams against my chest. I'm caught off guard. What is this?

As the best of friends, we wished each other well. I slowly approach and wonder if she will allow a final kiss. Without backing away, she lets my arms slide around her waist. We press our bodies close; the familiar warmth envelopes me. Our lips touch. As the plane took off, I knew that I would never see her again.

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AwesomEM 
@Rafaelopezjr Interesting, bold, and creative to start the story by framing her in a photograph-esque way. Also, amazing transition from sweet, to bitter in the final sentences
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Rafaelopezjr 
Looking forward to the next challenge.