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Tell me what went wrong
what the title says! can be poetry, free-verse, anything! Take a crack at it!
Ended October 1, 2022 • 23 Entries • Created by confusedsince10
Challenge
Tell me what went wrong
what the title says! can be poetry, free-verse, anything! Take a crack at it!
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Shy

Tell me

Tell me what went wrong with us

When the line between love and hate started to blur

when we became strangers who shared a home

When staying up talking about our future turned into silent nights and separate beds

when stolen kisses turned into broken hearts

When our foundation started to crumble

Tell me what went wrong with us

when the lies began

and the truths tore us apart

when the secret affairs began

when working late turned into a long nights away from home

when the good morning texts and I love you's turned into secret messages hidden away

tell me what went wrong with us

tell me

was it us......?

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AnnieBLynn 
I love that you repeat "tell me" throughout the prose. Really powerful, took my breath away
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Shy 
Thank you so much, I appreciate that
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confusedsince10 
OMG you had me hooked, in tears, and amazed! Great Job!!!
I am 21 years or older.