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From Straw to Gold
Pick an 'ugly' object, and create a character who finds it very beautiful. Have the character describe the object in a way that convinces the reader of its beauty. Then write another version where you convince the reader- by just describing the object- that the character is mentally unstable.
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RosemarieThorn

Small beauties

POV 1

The little cracks

along the surface

artfully places

let the light in.

The color attracts

they eye to see

the little delicate

pieces each inside.

The shape is wondrous

Beautiful and deceiving

Loving made

sadly forgotten.

POV 2

It is cracked and broken,

it fell on too many times

The pot was fixed to many times

leaving it shapeless and undefined.

It never dried, particles stuck inside.

The color long bleached by sun, is gone.