Challenge
Hook Me
Write the best hook to the beginning of a novel. Must start with the words "As my world burned...". No longer than three sentences. Tag me!
The Fallen Sun
As my world burned, the screams of my loved ones filled my brain. The sky was fire and the ground shook as the buildings collapsed around me. My brother's hand disappeared as the skyscrapers debris fell upon him; the earthquake taking my last will to live.
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