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Hook Me
Write the best hook to the beginning of a novel. Must start with the words "As my world burned...". No longer than three sentences. Tag me!
DreeProvince

“As my world burned...

...so did the cookies. They were delicous in that something-went-wrong kind of way. The ice on my burnt tongue melted like my face does during a July baseball game."