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Hook Me
Write the best hook to the beginning of a novel. Must start with the words "As my world burned...". No longer than three sentences. Tag me!
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DJP
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Controlled Burn

As my world burned she fueled the fire. Her eyes sent blazing heat through my chest, and the electricity in every touch of her fingertips prodded a dormant volcano in my groin. All I knew of the life I led before her presence burned to ash in the process, while I made peace with the fact that with death...comes new life.

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