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Hook Me
Write the best hook to the beginning of a novel. Must start with the words "As my world burned...". No longer than three sentences. Tag me!
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Rose0603

Phoenix Ashes

As my world burned and the sky filled with smoke and the smell of death, I came into life with a cry. What the war had violently taken away from the survivors, the world brought back to them in miracles and salvations. I was what everyone had thought to be lost- a sign that life could begin anew- that a Phoenix would rise again!