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Only Dialogue Exercise
Write a story that evokes a setting, space, and atmosphere only through the use of realistic dialogue between two distinct characters. No descriptions of where they are or who they are - no extra fluff of what's happening. Give us just enough context to understand what's going on from how they speak and what they say. Much love ladies and gents, get freaky with it c: Tag me @deathbyaudio
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Dmoral

Her Dad’s Last Phone Call

"I miss you, Daddy! When are you comin' home?"

"Soon, Emily, I'll be home soon. Please, don't worry."

"I'm not worried!"

"Okay, my little M&M. How's Mom? Is there anything she's not telling me?"

"She's worried, Daddy. I can see it."

"I know, honey. It's just...complicated. Are you being good though? Helping out?"

"Yes! Today, I helped Mom with the dishes! And, after, we got ice cream!"

"Your day sounds better than mine."

"But aren't you in that desert place? Af, Af-gan-stand?"

"It's Afghanistan silly, but yes. It's a desert, but not very much fun. And before you ask-there's no tumbleweeds, I already looked for you."

"Aww, why not? I wanted one."

"Hey, sorry, Emily, but Daddy has to go. The other guys need a turn on the phone. I'll talk to you soon though, tell Mom I'll call her as soon as I can."

"Okay, Daddy, I miss you."

"Goodbye."

"Bye!"

"One last thing, M&M."

"Mhm?"

"I love you."

"I love you too, Daddy. Can you please hurry home? Mom looks really sad."

"I promise."