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Write Ugly
Whether its with choppy sentences, weird topic, or in your characterization/dialogue, write something ugly. I put in a lot of effort to make my writing sound good and feel rhythmic, making my prose almost poetic. I'm tired of it. Please write me something to inspire off-beat styling. Please tag @wabisabi, I'll be choosing the winner.
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GAH OKAY SO I AM SO FLIPPETY

WHIPPETY

GIPPETY

PLEASED

BECAUSE LIFE

CAN

DO

THAT THING TO

YOU

SOMETIMES,

IT CAN HIT YOU LIKE THE SUN ON A HIGH SPEED MOTORWAY, CAN FILL YOU UP LIKE A MELTING ICE CUBE FULL OF COCA COLA OR IT CAN SHINE BRIGHT LIKE A SLIMEY PIECE OF SNOT. IT CAN BE AS VIVID AND AS COLOURFUL AS THE BLOOD RED OF A PERIOD. MESSY SMELLY LIFE, LIFE CAN BE SO GOOD TO YOU WHEN YOU'RE GOOD AND YOU'RE LOOKING FOR SOME GOOD AND WHEN THE BAD PARTS COME YOU STAY PATIENT AND KNOW THAT NOTHING EVER LASTS

NOT PAIN NOT SUFFERING NOT LIFE NOT PLEASURE

NONE OF IT WILL LAST

SO

AT TIMES.

IT CAN BE SO FLIPPETY WHIPPETY GOOD.

RADIOS BLARING OUT TOOOOONS GOOD SOUUUUUNDS AND LOVELY MOMENTS

FRENDS TELLING YOU THEY LOVE YOU AND THAT [AND I FLIPPERTY WHIPPERTY QUOTE: [7:19 pm, 09/09/2020] GH: i saw marilyn yesterday

[7:19 pm, 09/09/2020] GH: and i was saying how you are genuinely one of the sweetest, kindest, loveliest people ]

AND SOMEONE ELSE SAYS [10:14 am, 11/09/2020] CD : Woke up to Loyle Carner on the radio

[10:15 am, 11/09/2020] CD : Thought of you ]

I AM TIRED OF ANYTHING ELSE

JUST WANNA FEEL GUD

GOOD GOOD GOOD.

AND I FEEL GOOD. so. while it lasts. that's what I'll feel. messily ugly good, who wakes up with oil in her hair and bags under her eyes and talking to her flatmate who is the loveliest shiniest soul on earth and who cooks and drinks wine with her

focus on the good today. as ugly as it gets. I'm off to have a good day. I HOPE YOU DO TOO.