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shattered constellations
break me completely
Ended August 14, 2020 • 8 Entries • Created by deathetix
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shattered constellations
break me completely
when the stars blink out slowly
one
by
one
when the man
in
the
moon
no longer dreams
of
the
earth
when the sun
hides
his
face
to cry in silence
and
we
wander
over sleepless cities
because
s
h
a
t
t
e
r
e
d
constellations
cannot guide the night
nor
break the day
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chainedinshadow
@deathetix

HandsOfFire
OMG I LOVE THIS

deathetix
amazing

Mazzmyrrheyes
So glad to see you back! :)

Clarity
* Stands in awe, mouth open* WOOOW

EvelynDawn
Those shattered constellations must have fallen into the depth of the ocean, because this. is. deep.

rlove327
Beautiful! Good to see you again, @chainedinshadow.

Danceinsilence
Such a marked change in your style of writing and I mean this in a good way ... perhaps your time away did your mind and thoughts some good for you have only gotten better at what you do @chainedinshadow ... 8=)

KJ002
This is so beautiful. I love the structure and how the words just come together.

chainedinshadow
@KJ002 thank you!

PaperbackFish
dang this is gorgeous.

chainedinshadow
@paperbackfish awww thank you so much for all your love and support on my posts... you made my day ♥︎

PaperbackFish
of course! your likes made mine :)