Vice Versa
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subtle hints of blade’s keen
glittering chiseled edges
planted in the chest
stirring vague sense of
belonging somewhere down
in the guts
feelings long-gone
gone with the wind
when days carried on
bearing the pain
of things untold
gasping for lifeless air
in lively world of the dead
beneath sinking skies
where stars crumbling
into your callous gaze
over the web of lies you spun
and for once, i belong to you
when nothing left for us to hold on to.
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22.09.19
Pic: ©Laura Makabresku
JimLamb
Love the phrase "beneath sinking skies where stars crumbling into your callous gaze over the web of lies you spun." ... Impactful.
CarpeNoctem
thank you, mr.Lamb.... here's crumble stars in the jar for you ☆☆☆☆☆☆☆ @JimLamb
JimLamb
Thank you ... I needed that.
Yuki
oh wow... this is... I don't even the words to describe it. leaves you speechless, powerful piece.
CarpeNoctem
oh wow ..your speechlessness means a universe.. thanks sweet pumpkin @Yuki xx
Mazzmyrrheyes
Every word! <3 this is certainly worth the wait!
Yuki
@CarpeNoctem you’re welcome, that’s really sweet to hear ;)
Tuskntale
Absolutely Amaze Balls Batwoman seriously ❤️
CarpeNoctem
@Tuskntale thanks gorgeousness :* :* miss you so xxx
GaryEnglish
It's all been said. Beautifully sad x