Moutains rise.
I tremble.
But you promise.
You will carry me.
To the other side.
demcmurphy
is this a tanka?
Mnezz
5 7 5 7 7 (31 syllables) that’s the format for tankas. hmm, i am not sure exactly how to go about counting. i do like the theme. Lovely work! :) I hope that helps. <3
demcmurphy
Ok thank you:) I think I need to try again @mnezz. :)
Mnezz
any time :) you got this <3 @demcmurphy :)
demcmurphy
Disclaimer to my readers: Sorry guys, this is not a tanka.