Challenge
Describe the feeling of physical pain WITHOUT using these words(listed in the description)
don't use these: suffering, agony, torment, blood, bruise, cut, pain, sting, burn, discomfort, throbbing, pang, stab, cut, ouch, cry, scream.
any form- poetry or prose.
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A Feeling.
Sounds become a buzz in the ear
A room that holds no air
Gasping for a breath
But it evades the senses
A mind that has lost its reason
Encompassed completely with suffocation
The heart churning inside
Beating so fast as if it would explode
Lungs striving for air
As if a thousand breaths would not be enough
Limbs shaking so bad
They just might cumble at any moment
Eyes filled with a torrent of fluid
Even now it might wreak havoc
Body now so weak as if a hundred years old
Such that it was a slave to that something
That no one can ever grab or hold.