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Challenge of the Week LXXII
You (or your character) happen upon a strange pocket watch. You pick it up, dust it off, and tap it a couple times. It's ticking normally. You pull the crown and everything around you freezes. You press it back into place and normalcy returns. Amazed, you wind it forward, then backward, and impossibly, the world speeds up, then rewinds. Time is now yours to control.
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The Climb

I lose my footing and start sliding down a mountain of loose brass pebbles, before digging my arm in to stop myself.

I sit and rest for a moment. I feel physically fit and wide awake but as though my brain is stuck in the twighlight of a day dream.

I notice something cold in my breast pocket and fish it out; it looks like a brand new pocket watch.

I listen out to hear if it's still working but realise there's a mechanical white noise deafening all else. I clap my hands; nothing. The overwhelming noise is coming from everywhere.

I look around and see nothing but the continual glowing landscape of pebbles disapearing off into a golden horizon. Where am I and how did I get here?

I pick up a pebble and am confused by its familiar cold smooth surface and distinct embossed faces. I hold it up next to the watch; they look exactly the same.

I realise the mountain is ticking.

The watch from the mountain appears to be 1 minute behind mine, as do all the others.

Perhaps it's a sign?

I start to turn my watch back but as soon as it clicks through a second I feel the world thud, like the watch is fighting back.

I check the watch from the mountain again; 59 seconds. I put it in my pocket and grip my watch tightly as I turn it with all my strength. The landscape shudders and the watch vibrates but I can still read the time as I wind it back.

Suddenly I feel myself slide up the mountain - am I headed for the summit? To an escape? I tighten my grip as best as I can but my fingers are struggling against the vibration. I can feel it slipping past my finger tips.

I lose my footing and start sliding down a mountain of loose brass pebbles, before digging my arm in to stop myself.

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