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Describe the feeling of physical pain WITHOUT using these words(listed in the description)
don't use these: suffering, agony, torment, blood, bruise, cut, pain, sting, burn, discomfort, throbbing, pang, stab, cut, ouch, cry, scream. any form- poetry or prose.
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A Collection of Poems
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Oh that feels great

a spark of lightning bolts in a concentrated area.

numb at first, but then alive with sharp pricks of red-hot flames,

and numb again, at least for some,

it comes and goes for some,

or it could be constantly there,

-the lightning bolts and red-hot flames,

never ending, interrupting life,

a slight dull thought in the back of your head,

but within a second,

it explodes like a grenade,

sending off alarms in your head,

making your eyes water and teeth clamp,

if it's in your leg, you could fall over

and cause more flames,

and the worse it gets,

those red flames turn to white,

escalating so much you could pass out,

but in reality, it's just a feeling of heat,

that can make you fuzzy in the head,

and distress about unimportant matters

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