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Did you ever come across an incident where you realized how much you really love your life? I’d like to read some interesting real life incidents. Make it dramatic if you want, write something that’d stop the reader’s breath.
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FreeToFly
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The Nutcracker

The pretty dancers like snowflakes in the wind

the lights dimmed

Driving home in my pretty white dress from the Ballet

when all the sudden I start to pray

I don't know why but I was prompted to do so

Red, yellow, green

it was 10:13

A couple minutes, mabye seconds

I count my many blessings

I don't know why but I was prompted to do so

The white car in front

the red light went on as it stopped with a grunt

the screech of the brake

The fall of one snowflake.

the driver was dead in the car up ahead

the one in the backseat, dead

I began to bawl

two more snowflakes fall

I feared my snowflake would that night

but then i began to see a red flashing light

but this one was diffrent the red lights of the car

it was like one of a silver star

snowflakes fell that night

like the dancers landing in the light

of the pure white like the snow

that night at the show

The white of my dress

the pretty ballerinas

my mind full of regrets

the pretty primas

The red flashing lights

the blood on my dress

the blood of tonights

the bloody snowflakes confess

The people can from the truck in attampt to rescue us

one pulled me out and tended to my cuts

the fire as the car caught flame

my life would never be the same

the boy who survived from the car that was white

was sitting close to me when it all went down burning bright

he was the nephew of the driver whos snowflake had fallen

we both started bawling

the lady who pulled me out comforted me

and her husband knelt down on one knee

embraced me and the boy from the white car

they saved our lives adn apoligized

for being unable to save those who died

My mind went dark and my thoughts ceased

I woke in a hospital and as my hopes decreased

I saw the couple who saved my life that night

and i turned to see the doctor dressed in white

the doctors oufit was red with blood

it turns out the blood was mine

I nearly died that december night

I thought to myself as I cried

Forgive my grammar and my spelling mistakes

and think of your life, your lovely life

though it may contain strife

live it to the fullest, whatever it takes.

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