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"Gratitude" vs "Indebtedness" -- What is the difference? How would you explain the two in real life emotional examples? (more info in description)
"Gratitude" is the quality of being thankful; readiness to show appreciation for and to return kindness. "Indebtedness" is synonymous with gratitude, in the feeling of owing gratitude for a service or favor. With these two definitions in mind, think about the nuances between someone feeling "Gratitude" and someone feeling "Indebtedness" and how those differ emotionally. Then write what you come up with. Could be in poem format, or prose, doesn't matter, as long as you're focusing on sharing your perspective of how the two differ as someone experiencing them. // RULES // 1) Stay on topic. 2) Be clear about your perspective. 3) AFTER submitting yours, read and comment on at least 1 other entry-- do you share their view, did you enjoy how they wrote it? etc. [Obviously, if you're the first, you'll have to wait for another entry.] //CHOOSING A WINNER // a) Did they follow the rules? b) Was it an immersive read? c) Did it nail the nuances of feeling grateful vs indebted?

Entry 8, April 36- An Ode to Gratitude and all that is Fake

Gratitude is fake. It's thanking someone for holding the door for you, even though the minute you get there it is already closed. Still, you smile at them- faking an attempt to stroke their ego. That's why I only nod when I see strangers in hallways, a slight recognition so they know they exist. That's the thing- people always say to be honest, complementing your outfit even when you wear an ugly sweater, your makeup is smudged, or your pants are on inside out. I go out of my way not to do that, just to give people a taste or reality. Gratitude is superficial- it doesn't mean anything, and sugar coats every emotion.

But indebtedness- indebtedness is real. It is the tattered lining of your feather light purse, the fake nod you do to your boss at work, and the fraying edges of that six year old sweater you got before going to college. It is powerful. It is life changing. With indebtedness, you can bring the whole world to your knees.