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"Gratitude" vs "Indebtedness" -- What is the difference? How would you explain the two in real life emotional examples? (more info in description)
"Gratitude" is the quality of being thankful; readiness to show appreciation for and to return kindness. "Indebtedness" is synonymous with gratitude, in the feeling of owing gratitude for a service or favor. With these two definitions in mind, think about the nuances between someone feeling "Gratitude" and someone feeling "Indebtedness" and how those differ emotionally. Then write what you come up with. Could be in poem format, or prose, doesn't matter, as long as you're focusing on sharing your perspective of how the two differ as someone experiencing them. // RULES // 1) Stay on topic. 2) Be clear about your perspective. 3) AFTER submitting yours, read and comment on at least 1 other entry-- do you share their view, did you enjoy how they wrote it? etc. [Obviously, if you're the first, you'll have to wait for another entry.] //CHOOSING A WINNER // a) Did they follow the rules? b) Was it an immersive read? c) Did it nail the nuances of feeling grateful vs indebted?
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adrandall in Stream of Consciousness
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Distortion

They took me in when no one else would

They said they loved me

They put clothes on my back

Gave me chores before and after school

They kept food in my belly—most of the time

They hit me when I was bad

They hit me when I wasn’t good enough

They ignored me when they were bored of me

But…

I owe them

I have to pay them back

They saved me from an unknown world

I feel Indebtedness

It was hot after toiling in the bitter sun

Face, hair, uniform covered in sweat and ash

Yet the fire kept burning

Sixteen hours fighting for the structure behind me

Burning flames twenty feet higher than the tallest trees

Body weary

Throat parched

A mission to be finished

Completely surrounded by fire, no units can get to us

Scared, but determined

Just keep the fire at bay

Tap on the shoulder

Canteen shoved into my hands

Cool liquid satisfying the desolation settling over me

I can keep going

We can save this house

I feel gratitude

We survived

So did the house

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