Challenge
This is a collaboration prompt. Offer up a piece (poem or flash fiction) to be revised by another person on prose. (you may tag your preferred revisers). I want to see both the original and the revised version(s)! (is this confusing? okay, first time I am posting a prompt here)
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Listen to Me!
Listen to me!
Why can't you grasp it
That sometimes I need someone
To listen to me too, and I've heard
You speaking everyday for months, maybe
Even years, and I just need someone to
Listen to me the same way I listened
to you. And I figured you would
Be the best one to do that so...
Could you try and listen
To me for a change?