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Empathy
Make your readers care about your characters. It’s a piece of advice you hear a lot in the writing world. Strange, isn’t it, that invoking empathy is a marketable skill? Anyway, try to make us connect with a character in one short paragraph.
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compassion

They’re saying I killed the man. Poison in his drink, knife in his chest when it took too long for the life to drain from his eyes. I’d confess to it if I thought people would understand. See, he was going to die anyway. He was weeks out at most, failing organs and jelly limbs, he could barely sit up in bed. Every day he saw only the empty white of the palace ceiling and the rim of the porcelain bowl I used to feed him sad brown porridge. What is life in a state like that? When you’re young like me, at least people tell hopeful lies—they’ll say your aching joints could mend themselves one day, that you might become more than a lowly servant if you serve your monarch well. But for a man like him who had seen all there was to see, everyone was waiting for him to die. If he had been able to speak in those last moments, he would’ve begged me to finish him off. They’re saying I killed the man. But I know. I showed him compassion.

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I wanna meet the gnarled, twisted bits of you.
I've been dealing with my depression by personifying it (like in "a conversation"). I'm kinda obsessed with the idea of making something more "alive," giving it more power almost, to make it easier to deal with. If you were to give them character or a face or a body, what would your mental illness/troubles/dark emotions be like? How would you interact with them? What would they do on a day-to-day basis? Written however you like, no limitations. Please tag me @wabisabi.
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Dungeoncrawler Daydreams (delete)
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TheWolfeDen

Gemini

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I want...
What do you want to accomplish and look back on at the end of your life and not regret doing? This has been weighing on me for several days. Ask yourself this... What is my dream for m life? And out into words. Tag me please!!!
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i want

to stand with the freezing air against my face and sing as effortlessly as the wind that is threatening to knock me down and know that i am just where i'm meant to be.

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“and it made me think of you” Write about something that triggered your memory of somebody ending with “and it made me think of you”
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Lush Valley

Our hearts pounding rhythmically at a mesmerizing hypnotic cadence. A race against the clock ticking, winding, tocking. Rolling thunder chasing us. Lighting crashing. Sky growing fierce. Sweat dripping into lashes and blinding glacier blues. Cherry gloss smearing into a luscious cupids bow as decadence and aromatic whipped toppings and cherry jubilee slide down into unspeakable places. Smoldering hot mid -summers day. Sheets ripped by ropes, tape and glass. A metal rod and whip end the finale.

A walk in the park led me to a soulful glance at the broken pieces of bench where I was catapulted into its shattered remains

once more. As they led straight into my heart in a kaleidoscope of cognac merlot, empty promises and paramount nights. I stood alone. Wandering, meandering into broken paths. And it made me think of you.

#fastfiction #fiction #shortstory #lust #love #hot

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Write the truest sentence you know
"All you have to do is write one true sentence. Write the truest sentence you know." -Ernest Hemingway. I don't know about anyone else but this quote really got me thinking so I want to know what your truest sentence is! The rules are simple: One sentence only, and seeing as this is a creative exercise no facts allowed. For example, the Earth goes around the Sun or humans need oxygen to survive are factually correct but will not be allowed. Get the gist? Good! Now let's see what you guys can come up with! The winner will be chosen by me and praised!
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The Truth We Carry

From emotion to Earth, love to pain, you to me, there are no exceptions– everything is temporary.

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Describe a color without saying it’s name
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Hopeful

It was hopeful.

It's the colour of her hair and the laughter in her eyes. The rims of her glasses and the joy crackling in her soul. The beads on her camp bracelet, the sky at that one perfect moment, the way she could describe feeling happy.

It's a little too close to the bleakness she felt daily, the watered down light in the winter, and colour of her ex's favourite sweatshirt. The drink she drank when she didn't let herself eat. Little too close.

But it was bright, it was kind, it was unique. It was a good reminder.

It was hopeful.