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FROM THE BEST THINKER
Chapter 2 of 3
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HEROS ARE QUITE

It was a cold and misty day. My breath that hitting to my palm which sagging from my forehead was enough to warm me up, as the one who thinks the real taste of the life is thinking. Because I have a governor who has my jacket and I have soldiers whom I left them in the cold in order to strengthen their thoughts…

This is the general of my army, Akah. Yes, he is a colonel yet. I am not misunderstanding due to the reflection of the sun. I am just reflecting the sun to his shoulders, for now, because he is not suitable for that rank, now. He has to learn something.

He saluted someone with rigid and willingless movements. The ranks of the one who comes from the opposite of the way were not the sun. However, they were just parts of the jacket.

- Good day, Akah.

- Good day, sir.

- How are you?

- Good, sir.

- I did not see you at lunch. Where were you?

- I preferred to eat with my soldiers, sir.

- You are a colonel. Do what you supposed to do, not more.

- Yes, sir.

Akah thought about that all day. He has to do more. If not, he would not be different from the general. He arrived his room with these thoughts, and he ordered two drinks. Then he called the soldier guarding at the door:

- My son, the guard. Come here.

- Yes, sir.

- Sit down and have your drink.

- Yes, sir. Thank you.

- A subordinate cannot thank his commander.

- Yes, sir.

- What do you think, is it true?

- Orders are like that, sir.

- A subordinate can thank his commander with more work, soldier. Remember, obey orders completely, but do not neglect to think.

- Yes, sir.

- Relax, then you can leave with a salute.

Akah read the papers he needed to read, and quickly changed his clothes and went out. He looked at himself from the mirror and did not like himself. This tired look did not suitable for a developing army. The 2-hours sleep should have been low, but he could not stop thinking that prevented him from sleeping. Because he was always afraid of not thinking, rest is not important. Suddenly he noticed the reflected sky and jumped out not to be late.

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This is general of my army, Wolf. Wolf is former commander of the army. He is retired but still continues to serve as an honorary member. So there are no soldiers at his disposal. His bleached hair can mislead people. But he is very intelligent and agile. He’s going home with slow steps, with slow steps which aggravated by the moments. Now he can spend as much time as he wants with his family. He went into the garden of the house and took the two little kids, which fell on their feet, on their broad shoulders. For a moment as he walked through the happy laughter of his shoulders, he closed his eyes and missed the happiness he had with his soldiers. Immediately afterward a sadness ... surprised. What was that? Yeah, yeah, he knew. It was because the new army commander of those soldiers was someone who would never run with them. When he was leaving his grandsons, he took a deep breath and stood up and hugged his wife tightly. The heart-harmonized wife, of course, felt his feelings.

- Do not bother. Everything has an end.

- Everything?

- Yes.

Those coming people are very fussy!

- Yes, there is a problem?

This is one of my loyal soldiers, Heya. Heya is a lieutenant and very young, just like the others. Heya entered the dormitory and sat on the bed and started changing the guard’s clothes. He was visualizing a few seconds later that his friends will accumulate the room who are coming from dinner.

- Hi, Heya. How did the duty go?

- Not bad. Why are you in a hurry?

- There’s running. We have to be on time.

- Well, I hope they will not force you so much. I will use my right to rest after the duty.

- It looks like it’s going to be hard. Colonel Akah will come, too.

- He will run?

- Yeah. Despite his age, the man is a complete soldier... What are you doing?

- I’m getting ready. I will come too.

- Why?

- I do not think he has won your previous compliment by resting.

This is the captain of my army, Lion. Lion is a very clever and brave soldier, even if he is very hard. He is training the soldiers on the western soil of the country now. He was very rigid to them and was angry even at the slightest mistakes of them. The main reason for this was that he loved his soldiers as children and could not bear to see them weak. He saw the soldier running towards him when he was lying on the hanging cloth to dry his face, which was cold with the cold wind that hitting to flowing sweat through his forehead.

- Sir!

- Talk, my son.

- You are ordered to return to the city urgently, sir.

- Okay, boy, just take some rest and you can go on the road.

- Yes, sir.

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Here’s the governor. The governor, who seems like the owner of the city with his comfortable position and his servants.

-Come, come general.

Sir, he said, and he bent as much as the precious ranks came down from the waist of the governor. The governor’s pride was bubbling up.

- Relax, general. Relax. Why are you laughing at, what happened?

- I’m laughing at that Akah, sir. He said that he preferred to eat the same food as his soldiers, idiot!

- You mean the colonel, huh?

- Yes, sir.

- These are unnecessary people who try to solve everything. They act as though they are doing their duties fully...

- He’s doing all his duties fully, sir.

- He does not obey me fully, general.

- Yes, sir. You’re right, of course.

- These people do not know how to use what they have in their hands. They work for nothing. I do not understand why I would work when there are people who do not think anyway. It’s comfortable for them to not think.

- You’re right..

- Let ’s go over the plan.

- Yes, sir.

- First of all, you’re going to order an unplanned mission. You know who they are.

- Yes, sir.

- I’ll give someone an order to pick you up, at the time. Do not leave the headquarters, they should take you from headquarter.

- Then?

- You have not looked at the assignments? Give the team order to take me from my palace. The aftermath will be a mess; and then my soldiers and the people, with the news of the attack on the Governor, we will send them to the same places. The governor troops and the people who died in this mess will be proof of my righteousness, and trust on me will grow. The army that they admire will lose confidence. As a result of this mess, I will manage the city as I want; no one can react to me anymore.

- OK, but these are soldiers in love with the city, they will not hurt the governor’s soldiers and the people?

- There are some people who will hurt, general. When one of them died, those soldiers can no longer tolerate it and the confusion grows. The rest is up to me.

- Roger that, sir.

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FROM THE BEST THINKER
Chapter 1 of 3
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FROM THE BEST THINKER

The births are painful, but the real birth of a person is not to come out from inside of the mother. A person becomes a real person when the time of finding the truth. And this is also painful as the other one. We can only reach the real and true thoughts in the hard conditions, in order to feel and live the right. Here this story is a fictional story about pains that necessary to the birth of a real and powerful country.

Challenge
Puzzle Poem
(: you piece it together or leave it to the reader :)
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Two Points of the Puzzle

Here, there's a house

A man inside the house ...

opposite of the man, vitreous.

Blond hair at house,

A pink toothbrush

and red gloves.

There are no eyes on his eyes,

And no eyes on the glass...

A woman who owns them is missing.

Every evening it reflects the house, vitreous,

And two black eyes on the puzzle are missing.

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PENCIL OF CHILD

My fight is for peace.

Peace is my fight for.

For peace is my fight.

My fight ------ peace,

Peace ------ for,

For ------ my fight.

My fight is for ------

Peace, is my fight ------

For peace ------?

------ for peace

------ is my fight,

------ peace is my fight.

My fight ------ ------,

------ my fight ------,

------ ------ my fight...

--------

--------

For peace is my fight!

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freethor

Good reedings

There is someone in wards,

Facing a wall.

The walls always shuts,

He writes on the wall.

Here, from the captive, words...

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ESCALATING

You, in dark darkness;

A circle, in the darkness

Spheres, on the circle

Land, on one of the spheres

And you, who live in the land ...

There are heads between hands,

and it's escalating from the heads.

Challenge
Challenge of the Week XCIV
Lies and Liars. Perhaps it's a time when two accounts conflicted. Perhaps it's a lie you've told yourself since before you can remember. Write on the themes of lies and liars. Fiction or nonfiction, poetry or Prose.
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LIAR WORLDS

Have you ever looked at the world map?

Can you see yourself or anyone else?

Why do we see,

What happened or non-living creatures,

Not the living people?

So it never changed,

Our problem;

We don't see people!

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SUMMATION

Two people,

Does not consist of two people

It consists of three people.

First one,

Second one,

And the thing between them.

If there is no third one,

It means not

Two people.

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I, CITY AND MY SECRET DREAM

Oh that’s straight, dry and warm skin...

I miss you so much, beautiful woman.

But, where are your hands?

Or, in the city, did the sun hit an old column?

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FOR YOU,TOO

Hey, window in front of me ...

What kind of night is that?

- It's not night, it's daytime!

Then where is the light,

Is this a prison for you,too?