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The error was correct.
Ended December 15, 2017 • 2 Entries • Created by BatelEvvie
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Cover image for post Forgiveness of the Night, by sandflea68
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Forgiveness of the Night

Sinking under my skin -

a boiling vortex of quicksand -

my faults parch my throat,

gnarled hands squeeze my psyche.

I accept the blame into my soul

knowing innocent mistakes

are meant to be forgiven.

I walk, head held high

into the forgiveness of night,

no longer needing to lament

the past as my missteps dissolve

and slip through my teeth.

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The error was correct.
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Correction

The error that I made was solely mine. I made it with good intentions, not to be blind.

I make few errors when it comes to love, this time I made an error that would prove to behove.

I have made a grave error but it can be undone, the error I made, this can be outrun.

My trust for you has been broken, how can you do this to me again, how can your heart remain unbroken and mine is in pain.

Why are your words like daggers, why do you cut me so, here in my veins you pain me so.

This to me confirms that the error I have made, my error was correct, my error to walk away from you was accurate.

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