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Disturb me in 50 words or fewer
...we all float down here...
Ended June 23, 2017 • 113 Entries • Created by Jumotki
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...we all float down here...
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jwelker76
278 reads

High and Tight

I used to have hair down to my knees. But then I got a Brazilian. 

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Disturb me in 50 words or fewer
...we all float down here...
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Vi
268 reads

Hush Little Baby...

"Will you just shut up?!" the angry mother lashed out. She threw the dirty bowl back into the sink, splashing murky water everywhere. "Shit!"

She stormed across the kitchen to the bassinet.

"Ssshhhhh..." she picked up the baby, already blue, and cold to the touch. "Ssshhh... mummy's here now. Sshhhh..."

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Disturb me in 50 words or fewer
...we all float down here...
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SalingerTwain
220 reads

Dolls

My daughter loved playing with dolls. Lately, she wants dolls that are more life like. So I found some kids playing in the park and killed them. Then stuffed them and applied makeup. The smile she gave when she saw the dolls was priceless. I'm the best dad ever!!

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Disturb me in 50 words or fewer
...we all float down here...
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Tee_Hi
214 reads

’Tis Disturbing. Yes. Yes, It Is.

My dog is always, ALWAYS licking her privates.  I mean, she licks and laps and goes at it like it's filet mignon or something. So one day, I licked her down there, too.*

*Tastes like chicken.

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Disturb me in 50 words or fewer
...we all float down here...
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nceguy68
194 reads

Pillar of the community

Jim Larson was a fine shop owner.  At 9 p.m. nightly, you would see this pillar of the community descend the stairs of his basement and go to a secret room within.  He would sit and talk for hours to the corpses hanging on the wall.  Some old, some new.

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ckopeck
225 reads

Predator.

There she is.  A perfect body and beautiful face.  She plays so innocently with her friends, teasing me with her giddy laugh and golden locks.  I wonder if other men would kill to be me?  After all, I get to deliver her parents' mail every day.  Soon she'll be mine.

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Disturb me in 50 words or fewer
...we all float down here...
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LexiiLawrence
389 reads

Bad men and women.

"Now, promise me you will not talk to any strangers Amy." The stressed mummy said as she zipped up her daughters coat. 

"I know mummy. There are bad men." The little Red haired girl smiled.

"Good girl."

Amy never made it home.

Nobody said there were bad ladies too.

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...we all float down here...
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Tincrow
200 reads

The Accident

Police survey the scene: 

The husband, looking ashen sitting curbside clutching his broken wrist. The wife, lower lip quivering crimson from kissing the dashboard.  The car, overturned and twisted with headlights still staring into the distance. 

But most chilling, the empty child’s seat in the back-- and the open window.  

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LKahts
232 reads

The Letter

I open the letter hands shaking

Inside: the results of test taken

One name to set me free

The woman who gave birth to me

Eyes overflowing with tears

My heart stops beating in fear

For the name printed black and bold

Is the same name my current wife holds.

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amberrhian
277 reads

my daughter

My daughter isn't my daughter and she doesn't know it. She will never know how I cut her out of her mothers stomach and how I watched her slowly bleed to death. I guess its good that she was my own twin sister. Amy looks just like me. Almost identical

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