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Describing colors emotionally: Think of a color, and then describe a scene to make readers feel this color, without ever naming the color. See if readers can guess your color!
Ended July 1, 2016 • 36 Entries • Created by MEsolushospes
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Describing colors emotionally: Think of a color, and then describe a scene to make readers feel this color, without ever naming the color. See if readers can guess your color!
Cover image for post aloft the sea, by athena
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athena in Stream of Consciousness
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aloft the sea

It is the color in her eyes. It is the color of the sea.

It's no coincidence that you can drown in both.

It is the winter's chill. It is the color of her bedsheets.

It is the cool breeze on your face. The breath you exhale after you kiss her.

It is the crunch of ice and the hush of snow. It is the sound of words whispered privately.

It is the peace and contentment you feel as you hold her in your arms.

It is the loneliness I feel and the tears I cry for you as you love somebody else.

But most importantly, it will always be the color of her eyes, the same color as the sea.

The sea in which I lost you.

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Describing colors emotionally: Think of a color, and then describe a scene to make readers feel this color, without ever naming the color. See if readers can guess your color!
Cover image for post Opposite end, by Hell4heart
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Hell4heart in Stream of Consciousness
242 reads

Opposite end

Concealed and on its own. At the the other end of the light, it gets lost. Fading into a place we can't avoid. The darkness. Like a night sky without stars, it leaves you blind. Lost without vision to guide you. Look hard, and you'll see the depth that never ends. It's infinite.

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Describing colors emotionally: Think of a color, and then describe a scene to make readers feel this color, without ever naming the color. See if readers can guess your color!
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Sahara in Stream of Consciousness
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Revealing Recollections

Staring at myself in the mirror

Reflecting on misplaced deeds

Metallic memories flood my mind

Razor-sharp edges glint with regret

Shining surfaces remind of past mistakes

Gleaming moments show the truth of me

Luminous thoughts come with them that

Clear the prints, the clouds, the blurs and

I see, the other side of the looking glass.

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Describing colors emotionally: Think of a color, and then describe a scene to make readers feel this color, without ever naming the color. See if readers can guess your color!
Cover image for post Beware, by Hlore42
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Hlore42 in Stream of Consciousness
216 reads

Beware

Blinding Rage. Temper Building. Anger Flaring. Blood Boiling. Heat Rising.

Let it go. Or. Embrace it.

Passion. Lust. Desire. Love.

Rose colored lips sipping wine from a clear crystal glass.

Pale cheeks blushing from secrets untold.

Blood flowing freely from an open wound.

You my dear reader, know this color all too well.

The same color that represents passion also represents love.

But

The same color that represents love also represents caution.

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Describing colors emotionally: Think of a color, and then describe a scene to make readers feel this color, without ever naming the color. See if readers can guess your color!
Ms24601 in Stream of Consciousness
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The color of dust settling

The calm before the storm 

The color of nothing, of feeling nothing, of running out of tears

The color of days when you're alone and you're lonely, when there is nothing to hope for and nothing to say. 

The color after you've been too melancholy for too long and you're tired. Tired of feeling like the pain won't go away

The color of numbness, the calm after the storm

When the rain has washed away the edge and you're still hurting but quieter

And just a bit more unbearably. 

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Describing colors emotionally: Think of a color, and then describe a scene to make readers feel this color, without ever naming the color. See if readers can guess your color!
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Vyxyn in Stream of Consciousness
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Lush

I love to run through lush dewey fields early in the morn as the rooster calls us to wake.

I walk barefoot in the soft clover, as I search for a four leaf one, I look up and spy an unripe Apple in the tree. It's best not to eat those just yet, better to wait until ripe and red.

Have you figured it out yet?

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Describing colors emotionally: Think of a color, and then describe a scene to make readers feel this color, without ever naming the color. See if readers can guess your color!
Cover image for post Xanthous, by nfaulk6
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nfaulk6 in Stream of Consciousness
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Xanthous

The tonal equivalent of goodwill,

Scattered haphazardly amongst the trees.

A blooming narcissus named daffodil,

Captured Wordsworth’s eye “dancing in the breeze.”*

Genus helianthus, or sunflower,

Alongside aromatic marigold.

Charming blossoms sunlight does empower,

Developing skyward blissfully bold.

The vintage kerchief, today’s bandana,

Adjusted around the neck so neatly.

A tasty, nutritious, ripe banana,

Exemplifies this color completely.

Vocal hue of the singing canary,

Promoting ambiance light and airy.

*(From Wordsworth, William. (1802). “I Wandered Lonely as a Cloud”).

Here is the original limerick I wrote for this challenge; however, as usual, I failed to take notice of the 50-word minimum.

Hint: It's Not Purple

An integral part of daytime for us,

Lemons, canaries, a cab, and school bus.

A ripe banana,

A stylish bandana,

Omnipresent but not superfluous.

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Describing colors emotionally: Think of a color, and then describe a scene to make readers feel this color, without ever naming the color. See if readers can guess your color!
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cwicseolfor in Stream of Consciousness
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Nightscape

On clear nights, the stars lay against a velvet curtain. The sea ripples sleepily under the light of the moon. Everywhere and everything is surrounded by near silence and the cool air. A light goes on in a house, then goes off. Crickets chirp, and somewhere an owl hoots. Most people are asleep. But not me. I wouldn't want to miss my favorite time of day, the time covered by a calming and safe blanket of quietness, and the inspiration that comes with it.

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Describing colors emotionally: Think of a color, and then describe a scene to make readers feel this color, without ever naming the color. See if readers can guess your color!
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taimakina in Stream of Consciousness
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His eyes

It is the color his eyes are

Vibrant

Touching

Safe

That is how I felt

Then

He

Left

And now it

Is

My

Soul

I still see him but

His

Eyes

Are

No longer safe or vibrant or touching

They

Are

A

Blade, yet my blood is not red

My

Love

Has

Gone

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Describing colors emotionally: Think of a color, and then describe a scene to make readers feel this color, without ever naming the color. See if readers can guess your color!
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TakeItAwayMate in Stream of Consciousness
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Tranquility

It is not truly sadness

As some of the more morose pens might like to suggest,

But truly, a deep sense

Of profound serenity.

Perhaps it can be found,

When you wander through fields of morning glory.

A sea of intense tranquility,

Finally at peace.

Or better yet,

Among the far-flung stars and planets untouched-

And unknown

To our fledgling humanity.

But just maybe

It might find its way back to the spiral edge of some galaxy,

A tiny speck,

On the edge of reality.

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