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JUMBLE TONGUE- Prompt 5 - with four about love and lust, we're taking the power of 5 to the other end of the emotional spectrum. Jumble us some "ANGER, RAGE, HATE, and/or LOATHING" be creative, think abstract with your play of words and most importantly, have fun! I'll read and comment before the challenge ends.
Ended April 7, 2016 • 3 Entries • Created by another_proser
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JUMBLE TONGUE- Prompt 5 - with four about love and lust, we're taking the power of 5 to the other end of the emotional spectrum. Jumble us some "ANGER, RAGE, HATE, and/or LOATHING" be creative, think abstract with your play of words and most importantly, have fun! I'll read and comment before the challenge ends.
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sandflea68 in Poetry & Free Verse

Double Stranded Structure

Helix seethed and simmered before roiling

Spewing steam and acid over hapless DNA

doubled stranded structure noosed nubile fleece

cells mutated into unknown organisms, flailing

and lashing biological matter of egg cells

nucleus swimming to escape cell division

nuclear explosion overwhelms genomes

chemical building blocks forever altered.

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JUMBLE TONGUE- Prompt 5 - with four about love and lust, we're taking the power of 5 to the other end of the emotional spectrum. Jumble us some "ANGER, RAGE, HATE, and/or LOATHING" be creative, think abstract with your play of words and most importantly, have fun! I'll read and comment before the challenge ends.
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Yen in Poetry & Free Verse

Within without

Yellow ball of fire

White silvery mirror

Overlooking slavers

collectors of stories

and organ stealers

Unseeing the length

of the empty upwards

Of the crazy imaginings

between morning glories

and night tragedies

Feeding only

on paper values

Quite a pitiful show this is

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JUMBLE TONGUE- Prompt 5 - with four about love and lust, we're taking the power of 5 to the other end of the emotional spectrum. Jumble us some "ANGER, RAGE, HATE, and/or LOATHING" be creative, think abstract with your play of words and most importantly, have fun! I'll read and comment before the challenge ends.
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another_proser in Poetry & Free Verse

EXAMPLE (my jumble tongue #17)

broken baubles the lot

trying to float in their abyss

fighting for care in a people

of selfers, takers and dry hearts

with clashing thinks cause

to go rager hungry for red

what’s a mope to do

but toe the line

like a led-husk

sand counter

number-taken

order riding

flocker

What’s in the sun

otherwise, right?

|| another_proser ||

ROUGH TRANSLATION - for example help to new jumble tonguers.

people are damaged

trying to glide thru their own lives

struggling to have compassion for others

the selfish, the greedy, and heartless

with confrontational thoughts as a catalyst

to want to get brutally bloody

what is a nobody to do

but stand on the edge

like a lacky

time waseter

in line to take a number like the rest of 'em

focused on profit

to be part of society

How else do you get to tomorrow, right?

|| another_proser ||