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Tell me about winter
Poetry or prose. Tell me what winter looks or feels like to you.
Ended February 17, 2024 • 13 Entries • Created by champagnepoetry
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Tell me about winter
Poetry or prose. Tell me what winter looks or feels like to you.
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Delasity in Poetry & Free Verse

Winter Feels

Barren; open; still

Empty;

Heavy like the weight upon the snow covered ground;

waiting still for better days.

Winter feels

Silent; isolated; alone

Violent like the cold;

and Death will certainly collect what’s owed.

Winter is

renewal; resurrection; rebirth

Beauty like the awe new life brings;

and promise that soon will come the Spring.

©S.J.Reed

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Tell me about winter
Poetry or prose. Tell me what winter looks or feels like to you.
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confusedsince10 in Poetry & Free Verse

The Need For Knowing

Tell me about winter Father,

Tell me about the cold kisses,

and the longing touches of the wind

The pinches on my cheeks and

the tickling on my nose

Tell me about winter Father

For there is more I want to know

How it comes and it goes

and how it snows

Tell me more!

Tell me more!

Tell me why such a cold season is such a cheery time

And why the snow swallows me up

Oh look how high!

Tell me about winter Father

I want to know more

About Mrs. Winter

And how she goes.

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Tell me about winter
Poetry or prose. Tell me what winter looks or feels like to you.
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DandelionWine in Poetry & Free Verse

The Faces of Winter

As a child, my favorite season was a bright sparkling world. The clouds poured their glittering white flakes over the house, the yard, the trees, the road, and the little pond in the neighbor’s yard. Before eight in the morning, a snowman had to be erected. If mom couldn’t be persuaded to part from her red scarf, I had to use dad’s. It was threadbare from years of use and covered in little linty pills. But it would do. Sometimes mom let us have hot chocolate with breakfast. We could only have candy canes and marshmallows if it was the afternoon, however.

In winter, the world lives in slow motion. My feet did not run as fast, and the air was slow to come into my lungs. Even the bird that glided on the freezing currents did not pivot or dive as they did in the springtime. The sun slept more, and the nighttime creatures prowled about. I was never afraid. I had a house to stay in. Night held wintry treasures of its own. I’d sit with dad and my baby sister, and we’d listen to the barking coyotes and sometimes the howling wolves in the deepest month of the winter.

Dad’s birthday was in January. He always asked mom to make him a German chocolate cake for his gift. Christmas always distracted us, and too soon, dad’s birthday was upon us. He didn’t seem to mind the homemade cards written in crayon the day of his birthday or the lack of gifts. We’d go to the high school to sled, me, dad, my brother and my baby sister. Mom told us she liked to stay inside, where it was warm.

It has been years since I’ve spent the winter with my family. My dad’s tastes have changed. He no longer wants cake on his birthday. My brother has been at college for a few years, so we don’t see him often. My little sister is studying to be valedictorian; it’s hard to drag her out of the textbooks she lives in. My mom still doesn’t like the cold. Mom and dad had another kid when I was in high school. He likes to build snowmen. I see the same giddiness in his face when the snow gathers on the ground, but it isn’t the same.

That big bright sparkling world has come to be my least favorite season. The sun shirks his duties. The sky obscures the roads and traps people in their homes. The wind ices the road, with ill intent. It becomes so unbearably cold. Even the air I need burns my lungs and freezes my heart. The darkness whispers things that I hadn’t been able to hear as a child.

Where I once saw beauty, I see danger. Where once I reveled in joy, I sink deeper into darkness. Has Winter changed, or have I?

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Tell me about winter
Poetry or prose. Tell me what winter looks or feels like to you.
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Nana_101 in Poetry & Free Verse

Him

I think of the quiet days I spent talking to him, the one I loved.

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Tell me about winter
Poetry or prose. Tell me what winter looks or feels like to you.
Poetrymom1992 in Poetry & Free Verse

Sad

I stand out there alone in the cold

Warm and embarrassed, and now just alone

I told you how it felt and you said nothing back

I stood there in shock

When the sharp winds of winter attacked

We stood there in silence and you said "Lets just be friends"

My on going nightmare

I should have said nothing to them instead

But why did I admit to him, these feelings that I had?

I know that he didn't like me

Now I'm alone, and cold and sad

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Tell me about winter
Poetry or prose. Tell me what winter looks or feels like to you.
wynnelarsen in Poetry & Free Verse

Winter in California

Winter in California is a three-year-old girl,

Smiling, giggling,

Charming you with her sunny laugh.

You share pictures of her on Instagram:

“Look at my Winter!” you want to say.

“Isn’t she beautiful!

Don’t you wish she was yours?

I must be doing something right

To deserve a Winter like this.”

You go out to bask in your Winter,

Your glorious life-choices,

Your wonderful parenting.

That’s when Winter stops and howls,

Raging on the sidewalk,

Flailing, hitting, spitting,

Screaming.

You stand helpless,

Alone and wet.

Drowning in the humiliation

Of being caught unprepared

By this sudden tantrum.

The national news shakes its head.

“Isn’t that just like California

To have such a crazy Winter?

Those atmospheric rivers.

Those bomb cyclones.

California’s Winter is so crazy

They had to make up whole new weather names.”

Your family sends texts from places like Ohio.

“Are you okay?” they ask.

“We heard about your Winter.

Why don’t you move back East where Winters are normal?”

You struggle to explain,

“She’s not always like this.

She’s usually so well behaved.”

They shake their heads,

Grateful for their cold, predictable Winters,

Their impeccable life choices.

Your Winter takes a shuddering breath,

Stands up from the sidewalk,

And beams.

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Tell me about winter
Poetry or prose. Tell me what winter looks or feels like to you.
maahig in Poetry & Free Verse

Snowflakes

In the quiet embrace of winter's chill, a world adorned in a pristine blanket of snow, each flake a delicate masterpiece, I come alive. The air, numbingly perfect, carries the scent of pine and the promise of a silent sanctuary. Trees stand as guardians, their branches heavy with the weight of glistening crystals, sparkling under the moon's tender glow. Footprints leave a temporary mark on the once blank canvas. Cozy hearths call to me, casting warm glows on faces adorned with rosy hues, as the world outside is hushed in a serene lullaby of snowfall. Winter.

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Tell me about winter
Poetry or prose. Tell me what winter looks or feels like to you.
Fancyfingers in Poetry & Free Verse

SAD

It's a creeping sensation.

That starts in the dark. With the dark. Out of the dark.

It is the dark.

The darkness creeps in, day by day, until it's arrived.

Here.

All consuming.

I'm here, too.

Wallowing.

Floating.

Foggy.

Looming.

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Tell me about winter
Poetry or prose. Tell me what winter looks or feels like to you.
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7v7 in Poetry & Free Verse

Winter is Relative

There might come a time when

winter is not about snow fall but

about the whitewashed stucco

the slide of anticipatory dial tone

the noise of a vehicle but for now

it's about the picture postcard

softly falling fireside the curl

of smoke that escapes the mouth

of a mountain man lying on

the ground not sure if dead or

sleeping sound in nighting gown

obscuring the coolness of forehead

and collected reason of a silver capped

fountain pen in the pool of moonlight

that broaches the outside of the sill

with unearthly silences to wake...

02.11.2024

Tell me about Winter challenge @champagnepoetry

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Tell me about winter
Poetry or prose. Tell me what winter looks or feels like to you.
leahmeyers in Poetry & Free Verse

Cold

Winter is cold.

The slosh of snow in my boots,

Traveling on the icy roads,

Staying inside to stay warm,

My skin being as pale as the snow on the ground.

But winter is also warm,

The snow in my boots. From caroling outside to spread joy,

Traveling on the icy roads. To get to family Christmas,

Staying inside to stay warm. Watching a Christmas movie cuddled in a blanket.

My skin being as pale as the snow on the ground. Fake tan is a thing.