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10 heartbeats...
count your heartbeats.... and make mine beat faster! write a thriller! <50 words
Ended March 19, 2021 • 11 Entries • Created by Featherson
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10 heartbeats...
count your heartbeats.... and make mine beat faster! write a thriller! <50 words
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dctezcan
143 reads

Heart beating

Knees pressed to my mouth silence terror

blood leaks from my lips

through the cracks

my heart

pounding so loudly it echoes

in the dark

in sync

with footsteps, harsh breaths,

his painfully

heartbreakingly

pitiful

Sorry, baby, it won't happen again,

as the knob slowly turns

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10 heartbeats...
count your heartbeats.... and make mine beat faster! write a thriller! <50 words
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Moonsinger128
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ten beats, then silence

a step,

and a crash,

the shatter of a vase-

hesitation,

and fear,

there are scars on her face-

the fact,

the acceptance,

that she'll never escape this place.

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10 heartbeats...
count your heartbeats.... and make mine beat faster! write a thriller! <50 words
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HelenaTherese
98 reads

Watch

You hold your brother’s little hand

Don’t let go

He’s humming the song he knows drives you crazy and you tell him to stop

He slips his hand out, smiling

Calls your name as he runs away

Why aren’t you watching him?

One moment, his laughter

And the next

Silence

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10 heartbeats...
count your heartbeats.... and make mine beat faster! write a thriller! <50 words
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MariAntoinette
36 reads

10 beats in a box

10 heartbeats in your hand

while the organ’s still warm

you put it in a box

the address is random

the rest of the body

can be shipped to Costa Rica

but the heart (still beating)

goes to you free of shipping

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10 heartbeats...
count your heartbeats.... and make mine beat faster! write a thriller! <50 words
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RayOfSunlight
47 reads

The Heartbeats

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Just run

2

Didn’t have time to grab my shoes

3

Fall and scrape my knee

4

Run and lock the door

5

Into the closet, just dive

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What's that sound, nails scraping bricks

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Is this another lesson?

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Why so much hate?

9

I'm fine...

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10 heartbeats...
count your heartbeats.... and make mine beat faster! write a thriller! <50 words
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The Struggle In Us All
Chapter 358 of 500
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WhiteWolfe32

Chill

world crushes inward

heartbeat pounds

eyes hover on you

they are watching.

they are always watching.

your therapist says

that there’s no one there.

but you know that they’re real

the monsters

are

always

watching.

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10 heartbeats...
count your heartbeats.... and make mine beat faster! write a thriller! <50 words
Alkahest_Rain
66 reads

Earthquake

Architecture's frozen music

is unfrozen

A tumult. An explosion

As all earth

Slides into Ocean

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10 heartbeats...
count your heartbeats.... and make mine beat faster! write a thriller! <50 words
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Wowbear
25 reads

Lockdown

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What did Mom tell me?

2

"Hold your breath and count to ten."

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He's coming.

4

The walls are closing in.

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Can't hold my breath.

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I'm hyperventilating.

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Is he gone? I don't hear him.

8

I'm opening the door.

9

He's raising his gun.

10.

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10 heartbeats...
count your heartbeats.... and make mine beat faster! write a thriller! <50 words
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KassandraDick
39 reads

Cold air

It hits me like a wind and I wake up, bleary-eyed and confused. At first I don't compute the face above me. I only see black eyes, peeled back lips, fangs. It's not their cold expression, but their icy breath that tears panic through my chest.

@Featherson #Nightmare #thriller #Flashfiction

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10 heartbeats...
count your heartbeats.... and make mine beat faster! write a thriller! <50 words
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AJAY9979
40 reads

The Sheep and the Wolf (TW)

His lips pressed against mine, and all the blood in my body radiated towards my cheeks. He pulled me closer, his hands slithering to my pants. “No,” I moaned, pushing at his hand. I wasn’t ready. But, he didn’t stop. Not for two hours, despite me screaming the whole time.

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