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Challenge of the Week #56: Write the beginning of a story about a tyrannical king who threatens the entire realm. The most masterfully written piece, as voted and determined by the Prose team, will be crowned winner and receive $100. Quality beats quantity, always, but numbers make things easier for our judges, so share, share, share with friends, family, and connections. #ProseChallenge #getlit #itslit
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A Losing Battle

The people knelt silently with their heads bowed. A cough rang out from somewhere in their ranks, and as one, they tensed. Knees and shoulders ached, but not one of them dared to move. 

Finally, from above them, a voice rang out. 

"People of Trajim, I have gathered you here today to deliver tragic news. Scouts have told me that the people of Ahalis, people who we once called our allies, are preparing to strike against us. We must rally a defense. However, due to our recent disputes over borders, our forces are dwindled. It is time for all of our able-bodied men to step up, to defend their homes. Rise now as soldiers and defend your families!"

When no one moved, the king whistled sharply. Armored men stormed through the rows of kneeling people. All men, aside from the children and the elderly, were hauled away from the rest. Those left alone remained quiet; at least, until a boy barely of age was lifted to his feet. The woman beside him, his mother, grasped for him, but a soldier smacked her hand away. A low, wordless wail escaped the boy as he struggled to return to her side. "Please!" she shrieked, breaking the silence. "His mind is touched. Without a caretaker he can hardly survive. If he were to fight, he would surely be killed!" 

"And his life will save many others," the king boomed. 

"Will it?" the woman retorted. "I have friends in Ahalis, and from what they say it was you who began the war. A patrol of Ahalian soldiers was found slaughtered on our land." 

A shocked gasp echoed through the crowd. 

"You know as well as any of us that Ahalis will win this war. They have allies, while you have nothing but enemies. And yet still, instead of admitting your wrongs and trying to make peace, you will force innocent people to lay down their lives for you. Such a yellow-bellied king we have. " 

His face red with anger, the king shouted, "Those are treacherous words, woman! You will be hanged for your insolence." 

"So be it. A mother should always outlive her son, even if only by a short while."

The boy wailed again as the guards closed in around his mother. The soldiers holding him forced him to the ground as he tried to rush to her side. 

"Hang me if you wish. Still our enemies will hear of this day, of your actions, and they will know you for the snivelling weakling you are." 

"Silence!" 

"Never. Even when I am quiet, others will not be. You will hear these words every time you turn around until you finally accept them as truth, you snake! Tyrant! Coward!" 

"Guards! Silence this woman or I will have you all hanged alongside her!" 

There was the sound of metal against metal, and then a sword flashed in the sunlight. The woman's mouth was frozen in an angry scream as her head rolled on the ground, leaving a trail of crimson. 

The boy's struggles renewed as he watched his mother's body fall lifelessly. A continuous wail came out of his mouth, growing increasingly louder as time passed. 

"See what rebellion will do?" the king asked, shouting to be heard over the boy's roar. "I am your king, and you will obey. We will fight this war. We will win. however, if you rise against me, you will not live long enough to see our victory." 

The king's crown glinted as he turned and strode back into his palace. His men continued to move through the crowd, bringing forward all of those who were able to fight. Each man who was dragged away wore sorrow plainly on their faces. They knew they were being forced to march into a losing battle: they would never see their families again. 

The people of Trajim let their despair be known to the sky, with the wailing boy as their voice. 

Challenge
Prose Challenge of the Week #23: Write a haiku about deceit. The winner will be chosen based on a number of criteria, this includes: fire, form, and creative edge. Number of reads, bookmarks, and shares will also be taken into consideration. The winner will receive $100. When sharing to Twitter, please use the hashtag #ProseChallenge
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Drifting

Drifting in a sea

Of deceitful words you said

I learned how to swim

Challenge
Prose Challenge of the Week #22: Write about your nightmares. Minimum 10 word - Maximum 250 words. The winner will be chosen based on a number of criteria, this includes: fire, form, and creative edge. Number of reads, bookmarks, and shares will also be taken into consideration. The winner will receive $100. When sharing to Twitter, please use the hashtag #ProseChallenge
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Paralysis

“Don’t move”

I fight against the hands holding me down

Fingers like manacles around my wrists

“Don’t move”

Breath like a warm breeze on my face

Canines glowing white in the dark

“Don’t move”

Eyes flickering like candlelight

Boring into mine intently

“Don’t move”

I can’t

Hovering above me like a bug

Whispering like wind

“Don’t move”

Can’t breathe

My lungs are being crushed

Under an embodiment of fear

“Don’t move”

Can’t break free

All my strength does nothing

“Don’t move”

Trapped between awake and asleep

Paralysis

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