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Why your life matters, factually, scientifically. (Prose)
Adrian_C18

Why Your Life Matters

It doesn't. It doesn’t factually, scientifically, spiritually, morally or whatever other big words, fancy theories or ideas anyone will come up with. None of it does or ever will justify why your life matters. Only you can decide that. No other person, no out side greater system of evolution, no great plan or divine providence will make that true. Just a conscious choice and you and It’s probably the most important decision anyone ever makes.

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Challenge of the Week LXXXII
Here in the USA, it is Independence Day. What does it mean to be free? Do we need to feel free to be free? Are we free? Write about freedom. Fiction or non-fiction, poetry or Prose.
Adrian_C18

Freedom

When I was about 20 years old (I believe in my second year of college), on the way to a political philosophy class I was stopped and asked by a group of students a question. Out of anything in the world you could think of “What would you be most afraid of losing?”. Without any hesitation I said my freedom. At the time I had basically just spent the whole night before debating with myself and writing about the importance of, the definition, or inherent values of freedom and liberty. More telling and interesting to me was that those who had asked the question said I was the first one they had asked all day that had said my personal freedom or anything of the sort. Sure, I answered in a bias manner in the sense that I had been thinking about those things deeply at the time. but not one person? When I think of freedom I often think back on that moment. The fact that most people on a college campus (at least all the people this group had asked) had not even contemplated freedom as one of their most prized possessions they would fear to lose baffles me. It to me exemplifies how amazingly free our society is.

So much so we live in a place that people fear losing their car, computer, friends, hell even their mother more then their freedom?

What is a computer without the freedom to use it? What is a car without the freedom to go where one pleases? What is a friend without the freedom to associate? What is a mother if you don’t have the freedom to be with one’s family? And the concept can run infinitely deeper down the rabbit hole. What is an idea without the freedom to express it? What is a country that doesn’t respect the freedom and the sanctity of the individual spirit? All written word and every art, all skill and any craft employed now or at any point in history, all flow directly from the freedom of individuals to express themselves. How can art, poetry, song and dance exist without freedom of self expression? Ultimately how can one live in a society in relative peace and happiness without freedom and these things?

The founding fathers of America knew very well the fundamental importance of liberty and freedom. For this reason, they placed this principle at the very top of their constitution. The first amendment stating: “Congress shall make no law respecting an establishment of religion, or prohibiting the free exercise thereof; or abridging the freedom of speech, or of the press; or the right of the people peaceably to assemble, and to petition the Government for a redress of grievances”. In placing this rule above all others in the constitution it undoubtable shows to me that the founding fathers knew all to well that freedom (as laid out in this amendment) is what they were most afraid to cede to the British or any government for that matter.

Freedom; that which no honest man gives up but with life it self.

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Monsters
Tag me @Famewriter
Adrian_C18 in Micropoetry

Monsters

I saw a monster in a dream once,

Oh how it krept in on me.

The beast wondered there for months,

no where in my mind could I flee.

It was evil, it was wicked

it was destructive and corrupt.

It made me physically sickened;

ready to throw up.

When I finaly faced this monster in real life,

the senario had been set.

I’d fight the beast with strife,

until my dying breath.

Yet when the time came,

face to face with the demon

I felt shame for every one of thoes feelings.

The monster I had feared

I brought to tears.

The monster I had made

was far more afraid

of the monster that was me.

Adrian_C18

Words Build Bridges into Unexplored Regions

A famous statesmen once said “Words build bridges into unexplored regions”. We all know this to instinctively be true. Who has not experienced firsthand the power words can have? It is perhaps the most powerful force human beings possess. The most important battles are not fought with weapons but with words and ideas. For any conflict to manifest itself, any great undertaking to be done for good or bad, any issue of human existence to be contended, words and ideas are needed as the catalyst. What we esteem most, what we pursue in life, what we take action on are all subject to our thoughts and beliefs of mind, so often shaped by the words and ideas of others. In that way it could be said that the battles of tomorrow are already being fought today. The ideas and thoughts that will be used as the roots as well as the tools in the next important issue is already being organized into camps of opinion or thought before its conscious realization.

As human beings it is our duty to take part in the battle of ideas and formulate our own opinions on these matters. Even more importantly it is the obligation and responsibility of every democratic citizen to actively take part in honest debate and discourse. If our minds are closed and our ears shut off to the ideas of others we punish ourselves by not learning more and not reaching closer to the Truth by testing our own ideas and thoughts. At the same time if we accept those philosophies from others without critical scrutiny we similarly punish ourselves. All ideas need to truly be tested and honestly critically analyzed before we esteem it validation. A validation that can be rewritten in a short period of time once new information or knowledge is acquired. Ultimately we must be open and willing to listen and honestly engage with the ideas and words of others. In this way dialogue and the exchange of thoughts is perhaps the most important process human beings have ever engaged in. Yelling past one another is not a debate. Ignoring the other party’s thoughts, ideas and words is not honest discourse. Empty attacks aimed at ones character or nature does not present itself to learning the truth but in my view the destruction of it. I don’t think I am alone in my belief that human beings use their reason to change their mind, their views and ultimately their world. Through our thoughts and words we can change human’s minds in ways no show of force ever could.

As stated earlier “Words build bridges into unexplored regions”. With such a liberal idea one might think the author of the previous quote may have been Martin Luther King Jr. or perhaps Mahatma Ghandi. Interestingly it is most often attributed to perhaps the most villainous human being of the 20th century and author of the holocaust. In this we can see the power of words even questionably authored words can have. Is this statement not true or rendered false by its author? Would it be any more or less true if it was said by Martin Luther King Jr. or Mahatma Ghandi? I would argue it is clear despots can speak liberal thoughts and bring truth to words as much as fools and great men. For this reason we must be ever more vigilant not of what we think but how we think. Did Hitler not use the power of words to do many things previously not done before whether it be for good or for evil? More importantly can I myself not agree with such a sentiment without compromising a form of my character?

With this in mind Individuals should be free to associate and disassociate with the ideas of an individual or group as they please without needing to necessarily belong to that group. One can spend hours studying Erwin Rommel’s Infantry Attacks or Mao Zedong’s On Guerrilla Warfare, learn a great deal, employ those very strategies and tactics them self and still not be a Nazi or a Communist. Individuals with half a mind to think for themselves should in similar stride do the same. Formulate their understanding of the world from all facets. To disassociate completely to not even engage with every aspect of a groups ideas or a certain peoples understanding of reality because some aspects are upsetting or disturbing exemplifies neglect. That is to say we can read Mien Kampf or watch Francisco Franco’s Raza and learn a great deal without being in any way its adherent. How can one claim to have a true understanding of the Second World War without this type of study? How one can even be sure the work is what it is said to be by others? Could a study of these materials with an honest and open mind help create a better understanding of how to avoid similar problems in the future? Is it a surprise at all people want to formulate their own opinions on the matter?

Yet this is exactly what often occurs on University Campuses throughout the United States, the United Kingdom and Canada. Where speakers are either disinvited, shouted out, protested over or in some other way no plat formed. Their views are usually considered racists or fascists but above all offensive. But how can one even know that a speaker is detestable and ignorantly wrong without first hearing their point of view? Even if they are all of these things what could possibly make one so adamantly convinced that no students or faculty could learn anything from it? At the very least it shows you the other side of the argument that needs to be analyzed assessed, criticized and used to strengthen one’s own arguments. In the same way you can read someone’s work and take what you want from it while not being an adherent, you can just as easily listen to any speaker and do the same. How can the places considered to be the locations of the highest forms of education (in these countries and possibly the world) misunderstand such a verifiable and historically tested principle of not just democratic thinking but academic integrity and Truth seeking? A point is not disproven by levels of offence, moral high standing or attacks on the other side’s character, only by verifiable counterarguments that dismantle the ideas validity.

How do you know the Earth is round? How do you know the Moon revolves around the Earth? How do you know the Earth revolves at all? How do you know the Earth is more than 6,000 years old? If you knew exactly the understanding and direct methodologies on how you knew these things to be true would you not be a great deal more intelligent? Even if they have all been longs standing to be proven true? Ultimately you don’t win an argument by silencing a point of view. You don’t kill an idea simply by making the passing of it illegal or banned as the possession of it is impossible to be known. In the end, silence doesn’t build bridges into unexplored regions it breaks them.

Adrian_C18

One Dollar

It is the birthplace of a business,

or a coffee to start the day.

It’s a song and a hair accessory,

to give you confidence on your way.

It’s a scratch ticket, it’s bus fare,

It’s really the hope of a dream.

It’s an apple for the hungry,

for my kids its bubbles and ice cream.

Its lipstick or a condom

and I guess in that way it could be love.

In the right place it’s a book

with sacred knowledge from above.

To my Dad it’s a pint with a good dinner,

for my Mom a pint to help a sinner.

But to my friend it was a razor blade

and only about a gram it weights.

or

it

could

just

be

change.

Challenge
The world is ending and all that's left is one piece of paper. You have space for ten words. What do you write?
Use another ten words or less to describe who you would want to read it.
Adrian_C18 in Sci-Fi

Thought to Remember

"My name was Adrian, I loved human beings and life."

I was self aware and didnt like death.

Challenge
"I'm not sure why every leaf must die..."
Create a poem with this beginning.
Adrian_C18 in Poetry & Free Verse

You Can Try but This Leaf Wont Die

I’m not sure why

every leaf must die

I question it to be true.

As a Canadian boy

raised with pride there’s

one thing I always knew.

The Maple leaf is forever,

our symbol our sign

we will surrender it never

as it’s come to define

our people our pleasure

as we take it wherever

a Canadian you can find

Its seen the shores of Africa

and D-day we remember

it was at the Somme

for four months long

till victory in November.

At Passchendaele and Vimy Ridge

we raised the leaf on high

At Queenston heights and Lundy’s lane

Canadians behind it were willing to die

If Two world wars and the USA couldn’t kill this leaf

am I unfounded to say this in my belief

that as you wonder why

every leaf must die

I think not

and every time we fought

for our Maple Leaf and why.

Challenge
I don*t understand why ...???
No rules! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE TAG ME!
Adrian_C18

Understood Why

I don’t understand why,

you don’t understand why?

As I understand,

you understood.

Implying you understand

but you didn’t understand,

and I just misunderstood.

As I understand

because

well

I guess

you don’t understand why?

Challenge
The Origin of Creativity (A Prose Gold for One Month Scholarship Challenge) Any format.
Adrian_C18

The Origin of Creativity

If you think it through

I bet you already knew

that creativity starts with you.

Challenge
Write something everyone will award with a heart.
Adrian_C18

The Truth of Gold

To know the Truth is all I desire

to be a king among kings is all I aspire

to understand and yearn

for the knowledge of man

to have a deep burn

my whole life span

for the search of wealth, in great size

yet money means little in royal eyes

as true nobility is not measured in gold doubloons

tha’d be told to you by old buffoons

a true king can be recognize a mile away

its seen in open, on public display

not by a crown or fancy clothes

but by the people each king chose

to have by their side

as brothers with pride

for together they walk the path to enlightenment

they search for Light and Truth, even in their youth

for what value does each man hold

but what he can pass to another?

I tell you kings don’t trade gold

they exchange ideas together.